CnC Please?

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...ki-d7zd852.png

Kindly CnC this one please? Does it lack in something? or too much in something? harsh critics are welcome.
:')

it lacks tits. 2/10

Great as usual. the messiness is just right and its not extremely complicated. only issue i think is its somewhat lack of depth and the text ofc. but those can be easily fixed. Overall its the best so far :3

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Originally Posted by EpicKLF

Great as usual. the messiness is just right and its not extremely complicated. only issue i think is its somewhat lack of depth and the text ofc. but those can be easily fixed. Overall its the best so far :3

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http://i597.photobucket.com/albums/t...ps7283380c.png

I think this has the depth now? I guess..I havent noticed those.
and welp, my real problem is the text. as always.
and thank you! :3

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Originally Posted by sakaiyuji7

http://i597.photobucket.com/albums/t...ps7283380c.png

I think this has the depth now? I guess..I havent noticed those.
and welp, my real problem is the text. as always.
and thank you! :3

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Well you fixed every single issue i can find with it. so its perfect now

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Originally Posted by EpicKLF

Well you fixed every single issue i can find with it. so its perfect now

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hihi. :3 Thank you.

btw..that Aoba though (/*^*)/

Looks great! Good job.

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Originally Posted by SheS3xyGirl

Looks great! Good job.

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Thank you! :3