Glory clan emblem (semi-complete)

1.) I suck at text - never know what type of font to use or where to place it half the time, it annoyed me for a good 45 minutes i think, maybe longer.

2.) Any other ideas that I can change or add too it would be great.

It's suppose to "kinda" look realistic? Thats why I added lens flare and a bit of lighting effects.
Im thinking I should try to lighten up Glory a bit, maybe change the color.

Anyways I want peoples opinions and stuff so lets hear it!

CnC away!~


http://i.imgur.com/zXkvq6X.png


Edit: I haven't used photoshop for about 6 months, so this is like practice for me atm.

Make the red within the eye describing an O-shape rather than the current U-shape, thats all that seemed wrong to me. Very nice job

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Originally Posted by von_kram

Make the red within the eye describing an O-shape rather than the current U-shape, thats all that seemed wrong to me. Very nice job

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It's the curve of the way they eye is, but yeah I'll change that.

The bottom of the eye could use some eyelashes as well. imo

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Originally Posted by Funky Shot

The bottom of the eye could use some eyelashes as well. imo

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Its an eye from a anime drawing, so no, im not adding an eye lash.

I hope you show changes , keep the previous one and add to it the one you change to see how is the difference, you can use Batmanforever ftont, I think it would be good, let the text shine a bit at the left up corner like it's with the flare,Ghe spot of the texts is good because ghere wouldn't be better if it's out of the eye, thought try to me it like it's dugged on the eye not just a normal text, I don't know if it's possible but try

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And do something with the edges of the emblem, like it fade out with gray or black color but don't do it deep

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Originally Posted by Visionary

I hope you show changes , keep the previous one and add to it the one you change to see how is the difference, you can use Batmanforever ftont, I think it would be good, let the text shine a bit at the left up corner like it's with the flare,Ghe spot of the texts is good because ghere wouldn't be better if it's out of the eye, thought try to me it like it's dugged on the eye not just a normal text, I don't know if it's possible but try

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And do something with the edges of the emblem, like it fade out with gray or black color but don't do it deep

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I'll post an updated version when I have time. Busy.


Edit: I just realized what you had said, the word is suppose to be in the eye, as if it was part of the eye, not just over it. If that is what you meant. I wanted it to be in the eye.

I did a few changes that I will post in a minute.