http://i1169.photobucket.com/albums/...ps04e90ee0.jpg
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instead of completely bashing you like I used to let me tell you that you got the values all wrong, they're too strong. and they create too much of a saturation making the colors look really unnatural and hurtful to the eyes.
i recommend you to study the values of colors.
I'm not used to the fact you're not telling me that my works are complete piece of shit as well.
Well...I didn't pay a lot of attention at this moment,I will try to make his look color look more natural and brighter,I suppose I will try to improve tomorrow the colors.
Off topic question:Weren't you banned or something?
2nd Attempt To Gman Before and After
adrofl hitlol. http://puu.sh/5tSjM.png
Off-topic answer; yup, but 2 months is nothing I can't handle.
On-topic: Here's some quick VERY basic value sheets that should provide you with enough info for now;
http://puu.sh/5tSFh.png
http://puu.sh/5tSJo.png
http://puu.sh/5tSKu.png
Before : http://i1300.photobucket.com/albums/...pse3665701.jpg
After : http://i1300.photobucket.com/albums/...ps66a81f19.jpg
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Before : http://i1300.photobucket.com/albums/...ps8a4afb26.jpg
After : http://i1300.photobucket.com/albums/...ps907d3b34.jpg
Don't judge on that.. I can do better but no time