[TAG + AVATAR] Interrogation

Mkay guys.

I've made yet another new tag, I've called this one "Interrogation".

Please CnC it, DO NOT Rate it. Tell me what you think of these things:

• Depth
• Lighting
• Flow
• Realism
• Over-all "Feel" of the Tag

I made a Tag and an Avatar.

P.S: The Korean lettering at the bottom mean "Interrogation"

Here it is! :


Tag:
http://i583.photobucket.com/albums/s...errogation.png

Avatar:
http://i583.photobucket.com/albums/s...ogationAva.png

Thanks guys!

* Depth -- Too Deep.

* Lighting -- Too ****.

* Flow -- Great.

* Realism -- Too Sharp.

* Over-all "Feel" of the Tag -- Decent. a Little too Black. The Orange Glows Dont Match With Anything But Themselves.


Edit:: Just Noticed.
You Cut The Avatar Right Out of The Sig Correct?
And The Left and Right Sides are a Little too Blank.
Make It Filled.
If You Know What i Mean.

* Depth - Meh, you could on this part a bit more.
* Lighting - In your case, you could place in a tiny bit more to the right and if you totally changed it all the positions of the splatter brushes, perhaps on the shoulder.
* Flow - Meh
* Realism - Meh
* Over-all "Feel" of the Tag - Like Gothix, it's decent.

Imo the light source is waay too easy, could be much better, knowing your level of skill.

The black splatter brush would look much better being a C4D (I think)

I like the rest ;k

The first i saw this piece is the lightning and the splatter brushes are kinda the vocal :S

try to make the lightning real and blur the splatter brush a bit. Further more you could resize it a bit because there is to much open space at the size where no effects are and only brushed with black (or filtereffect)

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Gothix

* Depth -- Too Deep.

* Lighting -- Too ****.

* Flow -- Great.

* Realism -- Too Sharp.

* Over-all "Feel" of the Tag -- Decent. a Little too Black. The Orange Glows Dont Match With Anything But Themselves.


Edit:: Just Noticed.
You Cut The Avatar Right Out of The Sig Correct?
And The Left and Right Sides are a Little too Blank.
Make It Filled.
If You Know What i Mean.

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Thanks for CnC ^^
@ Cut-out part: Yarp.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Fresh

* Depth - Meh, you could on this part a bit more.
* Lighting - In your case, you could place in a tiny bit more to the right and if you totally changed it all the positions of the splatter brushes, perhaps on the shoulder.
* Flow - Meh
* Realism - Meh
* Over-all "Feel" of the Tag - Like Gothix, it's decent.

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Gracias for CnC

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Bakpao

Imo the light source is waay too easy, could be much better, knowing your level of skill.

The black splatter brush would look much better being a C4D (I think)

I like the rest ;k

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I agree about the C4D, but I was too lazy to, the the point of the splatter was to Clipping mask her face on it and lower opacity and break it up a little, but it didn't turn out how I wanted D:

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Stranger

The first i saw this piece is the lightning and the splatter brushes are kinda the vocal :S

try to make the lightning real and blur the splatter brush a bit. Further more you could resize it a bit because there is to much open space at the size where no effects are and only brushed with black (or filtereffect)

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Thanks ! :D


Thanks everyone for the CnC