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Don't like the render O_O
i dont realy like it :p
ur others were better >=O
super saiyan ftw.
http://www.watch-dragonball.com/watc...pisode_65.html
Zomg look the episode where goku first goes super saiyan and buttrapes frieza o_o
10mins of work?:S no offense but all you did was some smudging maybe some lighting and a gradient map. i know you will be hating on me again because you can't stand it when i give you a CnC. but i don't care, as i'm actually trying to help you.
here goes:
+1 The colors are alright they match eachother.
-1 Empty space's could use a stock or some effects imo.
-1 Smudging, it's way too bright and badly done it looks like she's transforming into a super saiyan.
-1 Text, way too simple and it doesn't even blend in it's also taking the vocal away.
-1 Simplicity, normally i love simplicity but you just did it wrong in this.. this is not tingling my tastes.
wich leads to a final fo 6/10
Again try to read some tutorials it will really help you out..
The **** and bright colours don't blend with each other.