My new video :) advert for F-Gunz at the end !

Hello I just made this video

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fz7IpKJqUbM


It took 5 hours to make (EDITING ONLY)
So please :D CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM!
THANK YOU!

P.S: VIDEO WAS NOT MADE TO SHOW OFF HOW PRO I AM JUST TESTING ...

AWNSERS TO SOME QUESTIONS :
Why do you have Archtype ?
I can't record at 100 FPS whit normal quality because my PC is not preety good and it lags...
Video's are over-edited!(not actually a question)
Sorry if ya don't like it ... But it was my first time making a gunz movie whit sony vegas... i tested out everything! ...
U n00b! (again no question)
I did not make this video to make me look pro!
JUST TESTING! :)
"I hate u ! Go to my channel i have some tips for u ...!"
I went to ur channel ... I saw movies... Didn't learn anything ! THANKS!

That should clear up some things !

i shoulda turned off ur archetype at beggining of movie.

My Pc is not very good... I was recording at 100 FPS and it started lagging ... so i put archtype ... no more lag:)

Don't record with archetype..
Song is kind of bad and the frags could be better, but the editing is cool!
7/10

hmmm i pretty much think you over edited it. and the clips you edited are very boring to watch..
personally i dislike it sorry.

WOW so many comments

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Originally Posted by nick-s-

hmmm i pretty much think you over edited it. and the clips you edited are very boring to watch..
personally i dislike it sorry.

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agreed. i dont either. doesnt mean u not good.

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Originally Posted by nick-s-

hmmm i pretty much think you over edited it. and the clips you edited are very boring to watch..
personally i dislike it sorry.

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This video is not made for showing how pro I am ... i just made to test out my new editing software :)

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Originally Posted by adicting

This video is not made for showing how pro I am ... i just made to test out my new editing software :)

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which software do u have?

Pretty boring, too slow, not such a good player tbh (sorry :(). You afk killed him, and you tked him. =/. Plus you used archetype to record...

Err...

4/10?