Can i get your opinion...

Can you give me your opinon/rate this siggy for me i used alot of the tips some of you guys gave me and i really appreciated it, so here is what i got ;)
http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/200/signaturebt.jpg

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1.)Scan lines are over-done.
2.)There's no focal point.
3.)No action
4.)Don't use paragraphs for subtext actually never write subtexts -.-


Don't want to write 100 points but you have a lot of work to do and I would focus on the points I told you about.

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Originally Posted by Ekital

1.)Scan lines are over-done.
2.)There's no focal point.
3.)No action
4.)Don't use paragraphs for subtext actually never write subtexts -.-


Don't want to write 100 points but you have a lot of work to do and I would focus on the points I told you about.

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samurai champloo was an epic anime

Hmmmm i see something stretched... and kinda agree with ekital

You used to many scanlines. And I think you should remove 1 render, and bring the other one to the centre of the picture.

5.5/10 ;oo