Dubstep intro I'm working on

A friend of mine wants me to make a dubstep intro for some videos he makes on youtube, here's what I got so far (work in progress).

http://music.sutros.com/songs/24513/dubintro.mp3

That's good for an intro.

It's interesting..
I think that if it's going to be an intro, the drop shouldn't be so early, 17 seconds in; BAM!

It's trance LOL.
I like it though.


The bass should be less frequent, more lenient.
For example:
Instead of, SCREEEETCH SCREEEEEEEEEETCH SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEEETCH.
Try, Screetch wobble wobble screetch :) .



Just my opinion though ^^.

Good luck :).

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Originally Posted by Jessy

It's interesting..
I think that if it's going to be an intro, the drop shouldn't be so early, 17 seconds in; BAM!

It's trance LOL.
I like it though.


The bass should be less frequent, more lenient.
For example:
Instead of, SCREEEETCH SCREEEEEEEEEETCH SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEEETCH.
Try, Screetch wobble wobble screetch :) .



Just my opinion though ^^.

Good luck :).

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The drop comes in really quick because I don't know what kind of intro he's looking for, I'll edit it to his liking though.

I understand, more wub wub less screech.

dat wub wub, pretty legit intro you got there buddy ^^

Sounded a bit thin to me. Also, try to make it more sporadic and unpredictable, because that's what dubstep is all about. ;D