CnC latest works

Recently, I've made an emblem for mike and a avatar for ommadawn but now i realised I never asked for CnC for it ._. so pls tell me what you think :3

Avatar:
http://i.imgur.com/hwIhDLi.png


Emblem:
http://i.imgur.com/NCmHsDS.png

@ommadawn&mike Imma get CnC and try to improve them :3

dont really know what to say to the first, but emblem is beast

Looks insane bro , hows the other thingy going ?

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Originally Posted by Miko pls

Looks insane bro , hows the other thingy going ?

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I'm still messing around with the style :p It'll prolly be done in about 2 days :3

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Originally Posted by Osuu

I'm still messing around with the style :p It'll prolly be done in about 2 days :3

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Cant wait , you deserve the reward no matter what

Both nice, the text on the first one however looks a bit... off.

smudge is no good :c

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Originally Posted by Taiki

smudge is no good :c

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Inorite teach me smudge lord

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Originally Posted by Osuu

Inorite teach me smudge lord

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Your smudging is abstract while the render has definite lines present, very concrete.

It just creates a conflict, that is why it looks off. If you would force the smudging into the background it would be fine, but both the render and the smudging are placed in the foreground which makes them fight for dominance.