Originally Posted by
StephanM
Tbh you should put your name in the end instead of the beginning.
I like it but I'd like to see a different font in the video, one that brings more energy into the trailer.
The phrase 'over 400 people' should be something like 'over 400 active players' (tho it's something like 600-700 active players a day).
Last but not least you should remove the 'Join us now!' cause without it it will look better.