Originally Posted by
Ekital
3/10
-There is no light source/ Bad lighting ( The light is coming from the top left but in the render the light comes from top right. )
-There is no focal.
-Using drop shadow on a brush is just a bad idea.
-You can still see the ship behind the brushes and it just looks misplaced.
-The direction of flow in the brushes doesn't match with the render.
-The color scheme is just meh. Green has a really high contrast and mixing it with black makes eyes disoriented and distracts your focus from the focal.