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I follow tutorials '-'
http://puu.sh/9BRbn/a7f188e413.png
http://puu.sh/9BUh5/8f344e9315.png
http://puu.sh/9DfwJ/aa3d1b01de.png
http://puu.sh/9Epgs/794963877d.png
http://puu.sh/9G9VA/b6be70bdad.png
http://puu.sh/9NtcI/240364761b.png
cnc ok
please tell me/link me to tutorials on how to do things '-'
the first one I think, the smudge is heavy here, try using a brush around 13-14px 70% opac. I like the colors tho you too much darken the area around Izaya which is wearing a black coat.Quote:
Originally Posted by Sonji No
the second one. I like the splatters, but same as the first one, your lighting, and your Jiraiya render looks like 'clipped'.
^ just my opinion though.
Is going dark around a dark area bad o.O? I honestly tried to smudge the back of jacket to make it blend into it and I agree i did go heavy with darkening most things but hey '-' Tha'ts wh Ihave saved psds to fix things.Quote:
Originally Posted by sakaiyuji7
Is going dark around a dark area bad? - Yes, you must focus on your render or the render itself. you must use your render as your focal.Quote:
Originally Posted by Sonji No
Well then I'll take note in that '-'Quote:
Originally Posted by sakaiyuji7
Is this a good fix for Jiraiya :o?
http://puu.sh/9BSHy/578a19900a.png
a little dark around the render an a little light on the render, and make your render to blend with the background so it'll not have the 'clipped' effect.Quote:
Originally Posted by Sonji No
It is very good, it just feels too dark on the edges like saka said. But your other version is a lot better too. The renders still seem "pasted" on the wallpaper, try and add some effects over the render like a splatter brush for the second one maybe? I don't blame you on the first since that particular render of izaya is horrible even with my attempt. Overall, keep working at it, its looking quite good so far!
http://puu.sh/9BTip/866c753de1.pngQuote:
Originally Posted by sakaiyuji7
Trying to remember things I picked up from tutorials ;o not sure how to make it not seemed "clipped" any advice :o that's my attempt on trying to fix it
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Originally Posted by EpicKLF
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Originally Posted by EpicKLF
I thought i recgonized the render :o thank you :)
hm. choose the quick selection tool > choose your render > then on 'masks' tab click 'add pixel mask' > then adjust the 'feather' according to your tasteQuote:
Originally Posted by Sonji No
http://puu.sh/9BUh5/8f344e9315.pngQuote:
Originally Posted by sakaiyuji7
'-'?
much better. it's the lightings in here that's missing all in all its good !Quote:
Originally Posted by Sonji No
K HOE. I'ma Cnc the second one. +'s are good sheit -'s are fuk u.
+ Color choice: these colors can be a great combination, here they aren't because you misused them like a roasted piece of banana penis.<3<3
end of +. nub.
- Depth: It's ****ed up really, maybe it's the render but still, I think you blurred the bottom of the render which was a mistake because it's so obvious and I think his hand needs to be very sharp in order to make it look like it's really facing the screen.
- Lightening: There are random lights all over the place, I suggest you don't lighten up the splatters but use the "lightening effects" feature in prodoshop to get some proper lightening. (Usually focal point is brightest -> Face?/Text)
- Render choice: LITERALLY NOOB. This render is no good, try to search some better renders or join some GFX forums they always post the best render packs. It doesn't have a flow/color scheme gg.
Don't mean to be rude ya know, just follow some baka tutorials. He's a great artist and I think you can use some of his experience. ALSHO, get some packs of random lights/fractals and start using them to make cool stuffffff.
Baka: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCjK...ASJrIWQ9H-i5mA
Hello Sonji-chan '-'
If you like this style, hit me up and I'll give you some lessons :o.o
http://puu.sh/9BXvt/fd0d2b8128.png
You should have added some foreground effects though, not only in the background but overall I like ok.
Look at the latest one on the first post now :o, and PM Lessons to me :)Quote:
Originally Posted by George
I followed another tutorial '-'
http://puu.sh/9DfwJ/aa3d1b01de.png
go back to copy and paste please
I wish there was a dislike button.Quote:
Originally Posted by Brisk
I wish you told me what's wrong with it instead of simply saying "dislike" '-'
You're silly. I was commenting on his comment. The dislike is for "go back to copy and paste"...Quote:
Originally Posted by Sonji No
Then what do you think of the newer one '-'Quote:
Originally Posted by Lemonish
sorry i still dislike do more tutorials
omg i love them makes me droollllll
My first Request '-'
http://puu.sh/9Epgs/794963877d.png
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Originally Posted by Steff
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Originally Posted by Steff
Oh, Well I'm looking for actual advice not your approval so I'd rather you do that anyway okok
http://puu.sh/9BUh5/8f344e9315.png
its overly bright, and why did u put lighting on the splatter? :o makes it look flat
For lighting and depth, "normally" it's dark on the outside, and bright on the inside as it is your main focus point. Like how George did it '-'
I honestly just followed the tutorial for that it looked good on the tutorial I guess on mine just looked ew '-' I'll clean this one up again later though thank you :)Quote:
Originally Posted by Osuu
You can find some tutorials on D.A (deviant art)
Idk if you're looking already in that too. and to sigtutorials.com
you're doing great! keep it up.
and don't just focus on splatters, you can add some c4d effects to your some sigs to make it awesome. :)
http://puu.sh/9Epgs/794963877d.pngQuote:
Originally Posted by sakaiyuji7
This has a C4D in it :p and I have on deviant art and thanks for the other link though :o I'll check it out
I haven't seen that, but now I have keep it up! sure no problem :o.oQuote:
Originally Posted by Sonji No
http://puu.sh/9G2B4/a3fc613478.png
'-' Cnc on this one please
should have put a lighting effect on the render though. but its good!Quote:
Originally Posted by Sonji No
The problem I have with this is that the lighting is messed up. You see the yellow light around her? Normally that would mean that the light source is behind her and is... yellow.... '-'Quote:
Originally Posted by Sonji No
That was bothering me too :p So i played around with it more so here's thatQuote:
Originally Posted by Osuu
http://puu.sh/9G9VA/b6be70bdad.png
Awkward size and seems like your render is low quality.Quote:
Originally Posted by Sonji No
It was an awkward size, but I had already started it and didn't feel like resizing it to my normal thingQuote:
Originally Posted by StephanM
Idk about the quality
you can make this as an avatar tho. if making this a sig wouldn't be nice.Quote:
Originally Posted by Sonji No
Oh hey look I made another one After 4 days '-'
http://puu.sh/9NtcI/240364761b.png
Cnc pls
second and third still the best buddy, sowwi :O