Project Love,Astronauts.

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05-20-2017
Pharaoh

Project Love,Astronauts.

I hope you find the deep meaning of it. Everything in this is art and has its own meaning.

http://orig06.deviantart.net/e7fb/f/...fx-db9rjle.jpg
05-20-2017
Pigglet

nice
05-20-2017
#1Chef

It looks great, the color contrast and the concept itself is awesome. But I feel like you could've worked with the background a bit more the right side of the piece seems too dominant. Also really not a fan of the font choice, in my opinion it didn't need any text on it at all, if you want a start for somewhere to find better fonts for future designs though click here.
05-20-2017
Pharaoh

Quote:

Originally Posted by #1Chef

It looks great, the color contrast and the concept itself is awesome. But I feel like you could've worked with the background a bit more the right side of the piece seems too dominant. Also really not a fan of the font choice, in my opinion it didn't need any text on it at all, if you want a start for somewhere to find better fonts for future designs though click here.

I figured it out that it didn't need the text,although I added it on purpose just so no one would use it without permission. So I added a random font for it. I also prefer dafont.com because it gives a lot of new fonts dazzling and amazing.
05-20-2017
#1Chef

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pharaoh

I figured it out that it didn't need the text,although I added it on purpose just so no one would use it without permission. So I added a random font for it. I also prefer dafont.com because it gives a lot of new fonts dazzling and amazing.

I get that about keeping the text for copyright purposes, but I have to disagree with you about the site, dafont rarely has any professional looking fonts, most of them look either very basic or overused, in the past I used that site a very long time ago till someone told me the same thing and I noticed it after that.
05-20-2017
Rain

Looks really cool, Next time try to do something unique with the text as what you did now kinda ruins the whole thing.

Here is a example, It's sort of stupid but it's creative and doesn't look lazy.

https://i.gyazo.com/ce735d683bebd9c9...c5e43eeebc.png
05-20-2017
Pharaoh

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rain

Looks really cool, Next time try to do something unique with the text as what you did now kinda ruins the whole thing.

Here is a example, It's sort of stupid but it's creative and doesn't look lazy.

https://i.gyazo.com/ce735d683bebd9c9...c5e43eeebc.png

Didn't really want to add it so yeah I was lazy. Thanks for the point outs though,next time I'll try to make it more indulging and attractive.
05-20-2017
Pharaoh

So due to both comments,I made 2 copies.
http://orig10.deviantart.net/b995/f/...fx-db9ru6z.jpg

http://orig09.deviantart.net/8735/f/...fx-db9ruxb.jpg
05-20-2017
Hateshiganai

Nindot sya bai Kappa
05-20-2017
StephanM

Upload a version without the text and compare that version to the version with text, you will see that the version without text is a lot better compared to a version with text (since the text seems out of place in the whole piece).
05-20-2017
Pharaoh

Quote:

Originally Posted by StephanM

Upload a version without the text and compare that version to the version with text, you will see that the version without text is a lot better compared to a version with text (since the text seems out of place in the whole piece).

I do have one but I don't want to post it. Don't want my work to be copied. I see the difference,thanks!
05-21-2017
StephanM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pharaoh

I do have one but I don't want to post it. Don't want my work to be copied. I see the difference,thanks!

Understandable, when I would make a piece I would make it without any text if that is the main idea (background, render and effects), can always add text if needed but I usually skip it.
Unless it would be a piece with a lot of tag (separate words).