LavaLink
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FA8mejllXkY
We Are Straight Jack-It Entertainment
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PKthQUPNkZA&feature=related
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LavaLink
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FA8mejllXkY
We Are Straight Jack-It Entertainment
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PKthQUPNkZA&feature=related
Lettering = ******* toy, srsly work on it.
Shading = good enough for me i like the colors.
pce, Chev1, ESK/TNP
I have no clue what that says, but okay.Quote:
Originally Posted by Slaughter house
It is too simple, work on something bigger.
Define bigger and maybe give me some examples?
Quote:
Originally Posted by Crypt
Freaking toy.
an inexperienced or incompetent writer. Someone whose writing is either wack, who uses sucker tips, or whose style is just plain cheesy. One old definition of "TOYS" is that it stands for "trouble on your system".
Get it?
Yeah, makes sense. I'll take your "criticism" constructively and work on it in future projects.
Add more into it.
Now you just got plain letters with some lines around it :/.
Does no one see art in this except for me?
I am sorry but I cannot see it.Quote:
Originally Posted by Crypt
Wow, okay. That's cool, too.
For example,
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KB_UgCrjcB0
>_>
Alright, there's a good example video. But how does that mean mine isn't artwork?
Quote:
Originally Posted by Crypt
Ofc u made artwork, the problem is, ur still at the lowest step of the stairs.
Just watch many vids, that keeps u inspired. I dont know if ur in the graffiti community/world.
But u might check out:
Deze70 = his youtube name, he makes kinda 3Dgraffiti art.
Stompdownkillaz = a graffiti group, these guys inspire me the most.
u also might check out:
Markcrilley = is youtube name.
just look for these kind of vids. it might help u out.
No dis, at ur work. Just giving u the critisicm.
The same critisicm when i started, and it was even worse believe me. Especially in the graff world.
U get smacked up easely.
Just draw the shit out of ur papers. Dont stop.
keep practicing.
And u will become something big.
Peace, Chev1 ESK/TNP
You can also try abstract drawings. I'm suggesting this because i see you like to work with colors. Try to draw something without it representing anything and color it. choose you colors to get a desired effect. the trick is to give your drawing meaning with the colors and without using lines.