http://i.imgur.com/ho1FZ.png
http://oi50.tinypic.com/mcbynm.jpg
Rate -/10
Don't just rate it. Tell me what to add/remove thanks.
EDIT: Just noticed his necklace is being blocked by the light render.
PS: Fok you Ekital.
Nah jks, ty lol.
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http://i.imgur.com/ho1FZ.png
http://oi50.tinypic.com/mcbynm.jpg
Rate -/10
Don't just rate it. Tell me what to add/remove thanks.
EDIT: Just noticed his necklace is being blocked by the light render.
PS: Fok you Ekital.
Nah jks, ty lol.
8/10 add some text i guess?
Gotta fix it up before the text. :)Quote:
Originally Posted by Serpento
you kinda messed up at cleaning the render :p I guess you're new to photoshop? Your techniques could use some work, but I like concept colour choice, I'd remove the weird thingies in the right upper corner and the bird, or make them blend more, and maybe try to get some more focal on the render, maybe sharpen it a bit.
I think the fire is misplaced and not fitting it.
The renders for me are cold, you can make an abstract effect with blending fire in, but then "Blend" it in, not just put it there.
Also, try to think of a setting before you make something instead of "just" doing something.
Ye, I think the render is burned too much. I'll remove the weird floating things, I was just testing out some C4DS.Quote:
Originally Posted by Flavour
Alright thanks.Quote:
Originally Posted by slugheady
bad
7/10
On dat hateradeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeQuote:
Originally Posted by Pickachuuuu
Just listen to what sluggy said.
Idk whether to remove the necklace or just fix the fire.Quote:
Originally Posted by Ekital
ThisQuote:
Originally Posted by slugheady
I don't think the element fire fits the render, the necklace is going to be rough for you so you'd be better off removing it. But if you want to improve your skills then keep trying...Quote:
Originally Posted by Mime
Rate it ugly goy....Quote:
Originally Posted by Luneth
4/10
Background
Render
c4d
Fire
You can use a small eraser and make the necklace stand out. You should also use gradient layers or photo filters to add some color and maybe even re-color the fire accordingly.
You made that background by yourself?
OT: Like slugy says.
5/10.
Newp came like that, Ekital gave me it.Quote:
Originally Posted by Teekhay
So, You basically put the render on it, put some c4d's on it, edited and done?Quote:
Originally Posted by Mime
Most backgrounds are like that? Your background is basically just smudge.........Quote:
Originally Posted by Teekhay
I don't even know why I use that signature, been made 2 years ago, when even I did that kind of stuff too.Quote:
Originally Posted by Mime
And nope, most backgrounds are made by yourself.
They don't have to be lol.Quote:
Originally Posted by Teekhay
Teekhay, most backgrounds are compositions. So you're actually wrong on that.Quote:
Originally Posted by Teekhay
Random stuff going on.
I wouldn't have put the fire. It's miss placed and the background looks like you smashed a whole bunch of textures from an aquul pack.
Uhh, You should haven't blurred one side like that, It's really ugly. Also, you should make the render blend more, maybe mess around with a smudging technique.
Finally work on that flow.
3.5/10
2/10
7/10
Terrible, just terrible. 3/10 in my eyes.
I'm not really a fan of the sig's colors but its an ok sig that's unfinished. I would like to rate your sig but its not complete. keep up the good work.
8/10.
I didn't know you make signatures, you seem to be very good.
P.S: Add a border to the signature or a out liner.
Quit photoshop plz.
Stick to mimics
gggggggg noob chris.
Ok guys, tell me where to continue from here. http://oi50.tinypic.com/mcbynm.jpg