Didn't really spend awhole lot of time choosing the font. If you guys got any suggestions for a different font, I love to see them.
/10 please.
http://i.imgur.com/arQ8L.png
Any tips on howto make it better would also be appreciated.
Thanks.
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Didn't really spend awhole lot of time choosing the font. If you guys got any suggestions for a different font, I love to see them.
/10 please.
http://i.imgur.com/arQ8L.png
Any tips on howto make it better would also be appreciated.
Thanks.
8/10
It's empty on the left side, the part I don't like about it.
6/10.
looks kinda like the render is slapped on and brushes are shit are in the background, try to blend the render into the background to make it seem more natural not so forced. Also not a bad idea to learn basic smudging and just use that with no other brushes/fractals/c4d's etc. if you learn basic smudging you can make anything and it would be hella decent, compared to just brush spam. after that learning were light should be and adding shadows would be nice. things like contrasting colours and levels/curves all comes with time.
just noticed but its huge, i usually make something small to make it more concise, makes it easier to the end user to see the whole image imo, also easier to work with less empty space.
Too much spam not enough flow
Got a video? I know howto smudge, but I'm not sure if it's what you mean.Quote:
Originally Posted by Taiki
He means you're spamming brushes...... way too much. There is no flowQuote:
Originally Posted by Adam
1. copyright on that image is on my name ;D
2. I got a better version with the same render, made ages ago :$
http://sphotos-c.ak.fbcdn.net/hphoto...3_209866_n.jpg
^^ 3 year old work..
well serious now..
Left too empty,
Too plain, just brushes on bg with different color tints..
render just pasted on it..
Text so plain..
no flow..
sorry ):
Honestly that render is trash lol sorry. No action barely any lighting, just a bad render to work with.
Aperrently you are so bad, that you can't work with so called OPEN renders,Quote:
Originally Posted by Ekital
where the top and sides are left open without cut, that is called a good render.
For the videos try youtube, else you could just go to deviantArt and look at some tutorials.Quote:
Originally Posted by Adam
i gots nothing
You're a ****** with typing skills. I'm saying the render has no action, definite lighting nor direction. It's a bad render to work with because it's so plain.Quote:
Originally Posted by KingHaze
7/10 Nicely done.
@Haze + Ekit
1) Thanks for bumping le thread.
2) I personally like the render. It's also easy to work with for me.
3) I'm still an amatuer at blending and fitting the render in. Tried to ask Daan but he never responds q.q.
4) I'ma redo the entire thing later if I get a chance.
10/10 pro as ****! PRO PRO PRO PRO
tenk you,tenk you.Quote:
Originally Posted by Sentinel
I've improved alot Fai, don't you think? Still gotta work on some shit though, like blending and spacing, obviously.
Dude honestly your work has grown in skill so much since you began, keep it up bro I support you 100%Quote:
Originally Posted by Adam
OFF TOPIC: GET ON FC
Appreciate it mate 8DQuote:
Originally Posted by Sentinel
O.F.: NU. AM WORK HW MENG.
This, barely any action and lightning on the render.Quote:
Originally Posted by Ekital