More C&C, Please?

Sorry, know I just posted one of these earlier.
Just finished this work and reviving threads anymore is near impossible.
I appreciate the C&C this community gives, because it's very good.

I know the little sparks off to the right don't look so hot, but how is it?

http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/...ps9c02e6f5.png

Things I've Tried To Improve From Signature 1:
- Issues with lighting
- Text flow and placement
- Light source matches render reflections
- Proper / Matching C4D

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Originally Posted by Quianmore

Sorry, know I just posted one of these earlier.
Just finished this work and reviving threads anymore is near impossible.
I appreciate the C&C this community gives, because it's very good.

I know the little sparks off to the right don't look so hot, but how is it?

http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/...ps9c02e6f5.png

Things I've Tried To Improve From Signature 1:
- Issues with lighting
- Text flow and placement
- Light source matches render reflections
- Proper / Matching C4D

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Something I've learned from people (Resort mainly) is to put a dot of white on a low setted brush, and the do the same with black on the more un necessary side of the signature. I personally think your last signature was better, though that doesn't mean this is bad.
I'd say maybe a 6-7/10.

Some of the blending seems a tad bit off, and those sparkily things don't really add on to make the signature better. I'll revisit this thread later since I just woke up. Then I'll give a bit more better CnC.

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Originally Posted by Adam

Something I've learned from people (Resort mainly) is to put a dot of white on a low setted brush, and the do the same with black on the more un necessary side of the signature. I personally think your last signature was better, though that doesn't mean this is bad.
I'd say maybe a 6-7/10.

Some of the blending seems a tad bit off, and those sparkily things don't really add on to make the signature better. I'll revisit this thread later since I just woke up. Then I'll give a bit more better CnC.

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Thanks, though for attempting, haha.
Damn, I actually thought I did I relatively good job with it.
I'm terrible at graphics! D: Haha

I only like the IDEA of having those colors, it's really low quality, the lighting is messed up. the color usement is good but they're messed up since they have a gray-tint over them which kills the colors.
sorry dude but that tag is a complete no-go. I can't say anything good about it.

Nice work. 10/10 ^^

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Originally Posted by Ommadawn

Nice work. 10/10 ^^

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You don't know what you're talking about.

Nice make me 1 :)

Nice smudging with awesome colors that match up.

Text - 8/10

Overall 7/10

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Originally Posted by Quianmore

Thanks, though for attempting, haha.
Damn, I actually thought I did I relatively good job with it.
I'm terrible at graphics! D: Haha

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You're way better than me.

For this sig, The render isn't blended in at all on the left side. The text is decent as always (don't change it!). The lighting is off and a bit too bright on her face. The quality seems low for some reason too. 4/10

Thanks for all of the C&Cs!

I'm noticing a lot of comments about the quality, and I want it to be known that the render I used was naturally low quality, so I degraded the C4D's to match because having a high quality surrounding area matched with a low quality focal point would just look utterly silly.

I know in graphics it's best to use higher / best quality renders, but this example was to test matching styles.
Not to display great graphic quality.

Hmm, I believe that all of the main points have been already spoken about, so I'd like to put your skills to the test. Would you mind accepting a request of mine?

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Originally Posted by Adam

Hmm, I believe that all of the main points have been already spoken about, so I'd like to put your skills to the test. Would you mind accepting a request of mine?

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you're just trying to get that render cut-out because you're way too lazy to do it yourself. K@K

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Originally Posted by Adam

Hmm, I believe that all of the main points have been already spoken about, so I'd like to put your skills to the test. Would you mind accepting a request of mine?

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What?

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Originally Posted by Nickachu

you're just trying to get that render cut-out because you're way too lazy to do it yourself. K@K

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The one I sent you?
1) I was going to request a signature.
2) I tried cutting it out but it looked like horse shit when I was done LOL.
Besides, the request that came with that render/wallpaper isn't one that I'm required to do, since the requester doesn't really need it. He only asked since I was bored at the time ;p

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Originally Posted by Adam

The one I sent you?
1) I was going to request a signature.
2) I tried cutting it out but it looked like horse shit when I was done LOL.
Besides, the request that came with that render/wallpaper isn't one that I'm required to do, since the requester doesn't really need it. He only asked since I was bored at the time ;p

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Show me said request :D

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Originally Posted by Quianmore

What?

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Render: http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/6...head1anime.png
Signature and/or Avatar (Or request a Size): Whatever your default size is.
Text: Quianmore
Subtext (Optional but suggested): Signature Maker

I'd just like to see how your signatures look when it's a request, and not just a personal thing. If you don't feel like doing it, it's fine aswell ;P

All those effects make the original render seem very, very irrelevant.

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Originally Posted by Adam

Render: http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/6...head1anime.png
Signature and/or Avatar (Or request a Size): Whatever your default size is.
Text: Quianmore
Subtext (Optional but suggested): Signature Maker

I'd just like to see how your signatures look when it's a request, and not just a personal thing. If you don't feel like doing it, it's fine aswell ;P

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http://i2.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/...66/158/d8b.png
http://spacelifethoughts.com/PICS/Ch...e-Accepted.png

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Originally Posted by Adam

Render: http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/6...head1anime.png
Signature and/or Avatar (Or request a Size): Whatever your default size is.
Text: Quianmore
Subtext (Optional but suggested): Signature Maker

I'd just like to see how your signatures look when it's a request, and not just a personal thing. If you don't feel like doing it, it's fine aswell ;P

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Bumping the request just to remind ya :
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Fix your quality with the lighting also. Over all i'd rate it a 7.5/10. I'm sure it would be a 8 or 9 out of 10 if you had your quality fixed & smudging anyways Keep trying.

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Originally Posted by DesiBoii

Fix your quality with the lighting also. Over all i'd rate it a 7.5/10. I'm sure it would be a 8 or 9 out of 10 if you had your quality fixed & smudging anyways Keep trying.

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The render was LQ, which is why he decided to level it out and made the entire thing LQ, matching the render.

uhm the bitch looks like casper the ghost jsut saying

Nice 10/10