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Comments are appreciated, happy new year folks.
pls make sig for mr taint
tree in background kinda low quality or somethin idk doesnt look nice
It's blurred to blend the render, it's not LQ.Quote:
Originally Posted by Jaime Pls
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Looks epic, abstract <3
The render looks pasted somehow, maybe because it's too saturated for the background or too sharpened. And while the text looks nice, it's a bit hard to see/read, maybe a stroke or light shadows and even a dark outer glow would help. Also the bright flair doesn't go well with the background, because it seems dark for some reason, it goes well with the effects and the render tho. But those are just tiny issues.Ooverall its very appealing and thoroughly fantastic!
the render is 2 light while bg is 2 dark try to lighten a bit the bg or make the render a bit darker adding some shadows so it'll blend in more.
Looks very nice, I don't enjoy how the font looks though.
Me see what me can do.Quote:
Originally Posted by Taint
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Originally Posted by Jaime Pls
Thanks :) and yeah as George said, it's blurred.Quote:
Originally Posted by George
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Originally Posted by EpicKLF
Thanks. I agree, the background is very dark, but that is because it's very distracting. I had to do it to keep the attention focused on the render and the effects around it. About the text, I really did my best, if I were to make it any thicker it would've looked like crap, should try something different next time tho.Quote:
Originally Posted by Arances
Thank ya :D well yeah I need to work more on my abilities of making an "appealing" text.Quote:
Originally Posted by Bulbasaur
Hello.Quote:
Originally Posted by Lemonish
Hi.Quote:
Originally Posted by Buddhism
I chose this signature because it makes me laugh the way Scar says it.
On the commas thing, it's not like I'm writing an essay or something.
And I really don't see how using (") instead of (') is a horrible mess, when EpicKLF said my art piece is appealing as a whole, including the text. Yes it is not direct, but it is quoted.
But still, thanks. I like to interact with people who are better than me in English, as it is not really my main language.
I apologize because I didn't mean to be so rude.
Secondly, your English is actually very good if it is not your first language!
The signature looks absolutely amazing by the way. I never commented on the actual topic.
Cheers!
That green streak running across the tag doesn't help the cause.
You weren't rude, you just corrected my wrongs exaggeratedly.Quote:
Originally Posted by Buddhism
Yeah I thought so. Is this any better?Quote:
Originally Posted by Taiki
http://i1267.photobucket.com/albums/...nature40-1.jpg
http://puu.sh/69IF0.png
Considering this line is a light source it is absolutely IMPOSSIBLE to give greyish tone. it should be completely white.
another thing that annoys me is the fact that you can clearly see you used a large soft brush to put emphasis on the depth.
Edit:
I took the liberty of doing some corrections and color manipulating. As I don't have the PSD I couldn't do much but make corrections but here's my version:
Before:http://i1267.photobucket.com/albums/...nature40-1.jpg After:http://puu.sh/69JVd.png
You can see that it looks a lot more fine-tuned now.
my advice is to look at actual photo's that don't have filters applied to them ( professional photo's of course. ) to see which colors blend together, what kind of aspects about a picture shows warm/cold colors etc.
also, a light source should NEVER be in the corner. it takes away the focus point and it's simply just unnatural.
too much blurrrrQuote:
Originally Posted by Nickachu
nice 9/10
nobhead no more talk
Thanks both of you.
@Nickachu I appreciate it that you took the time to write such a useful comment. I will consider changing the light source position, but it just seemed that the light is coming from there as if it's a sun or something. About the blur, I'm guessing your blur layer was put on lighten? I tried that once and I didn't really like the result, I prefer normal blur. About the light streak, you're right, I shouldn't have added it in the first place. But I gotta say, I still prefer your version, what did you do for the color corrections? is it just contrast and brightness?
not bad I like it just that her breast are too small you should fix that.
I've only set a blurred layer to lighten once, which was when I just started photoshop. It's horrible. NEVER do it. thank god you don't like it.Quote:
Originally Posted by Lemonish
as to the colors, I'm a fine-artist myself so I know how colors work, it's just looking at life around you and trying to figure out which colors goes along with others.
once you get the hang of it and start to understand the theory behind it the process of understanding colors becomes natural.
I'd suggest just checking out real life situations and looking up as many professional photo's as you possibly can for now ( unfiltered ones ofcourse. )
as for the color adjustments there's a different variety of ways you can change the color management, every single picture is different so there's no official way of doing so.
in this case I had to color balance it manually, adjust the values and curves a little bit ( by doing so you automatically change the contrast, but you'll learn this once you start studying colors and values. )
and then once all colors seemed natural to me I started adding the effects such as adding the warming filters/gradient maps etc.
OMG I like it so much!!!
Don't be so sure ;) thanks.Quote:
Originally Posted by Underground
Haha, thank you.Quote:
Originally Posted by Crokoro
Nice "something" man but the text makes me dizzy somehow lol
nice work well done. seems like you like nature . c;