What should I add or changed?

What Should I take out or adjust or add? Im stuck :x



http://i.imgur.com/Mv5Zqtc.png





Edited: http://i.imgur.com/sgstkLf.png

it's awesome xd !
u dont need to put anything again

Idk, it just doesn't feel right, tone done a little bit on the color and sharpen everything and then blur some parts to give depth, like the legs perhaps? it still is a bit too complicated for me...

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Originally Posted by EpicKLF

Idk, it just doesn't feel right, tone done a little bit on the color and sharpen everything and then blur some parts to give depth, like the legs perhaps? it still is a bit too complicated for me...

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I'll wait for some more.

The colors are too... "forced". I'm guessing you put a purple to orange gradient map? Try decreasing the opacity 'cause atm it's wayyy to dark. Also the corners/edges of the render is too sharp, it doesn't blend with the back ground. Try to blur the edges and see if that helps.

Good luck :3

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Originally Posted by Osuu

The colors are too... "forced". I'm guessing you put a purple to orange gradient map? Try decreasing the opacity 'cause atm it's wayyy to dark. Also the corners/edges of the render is too sharp, it doesn't blend with the back ground. Try to blur the edges and see if that helps.

Good luck :3

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Oki doki

lacks bras and panties

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lacks bras and panties

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Lacks beauty behind personality ^ :D

Okay, phew, >_<"


What should I fix / change now

The only problem that I see with this is that the color is bad and so is the render. Try not to spam the signature with C4Ds, it looks awful when you do it.

Ignore A tissue's cnc because it was virtually worthless. People should never be forced to change their canvas if they decided they want to use it. Anyway, it's a bit over saturated and contrast seems a bit high. Softer colors would work wonder. A bit more blending between the bg and render would make it feel more like they belong there. Some edges are a bit too crisp.

It's awesome its really look a nice!

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Originally Posted by Spirestone

It's awesome its really look a nice!

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ye ;)

Talent. 8D

The only thing you lack is a name for the group! Hahahaha jk :P

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Originally Posted by HellSniper

Talent. 8D

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Originally Posted by HellSniper

Talent. 8D

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Originally Posted by Rhysin

Ignore A tissue's cnc because it was virtually worthless. People should never be forced to change their canvas if they decided they want to use it. Anyway, it's a bit over saturated and contrast seems a bit high. Softer colors would work wonder. A bit more blending between the bg and render would make it feel more like they belong there. Some edges are a bit too crisp.

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People like these are still alive in the forums? Since when were people not allowed to CnC freely in the GFX section? Are you the king of the GFX section now?