Cnc is much appreciated, even though it was meant to be simple as a wallpaper for my Mac.
My most recent edit:
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Cnc is much appreciated, even though it was meant to be simple as a wallpaper for my Mac.
My most recent edit:
Font - Seems nice. Also something we don't see too often for a change.
Background - I like the shading etc on the background, would have been better if it wasn't that bright but meh..
Overall - I would say 9/10.
Great work. :P
Thanks for stating your opinion! I do agree on the background being a little too bright. I actually fixed that issue but I don't feel like reuploading it again... I still feel, the text shouldn't even exist here, since it takes away from the focus however.Quote:
Originally Posted by Divine
I'm not into all this photoshop and stuff you know.
But from what i've seen it's pretty good.
I would give it a 8/10.
The explanation for the rate i'm giving you is simple. I took one point off because I don't really like the color orange. I took another point off because you made the little part to bright around the airplane.
I respect your ability to make such great work and even I can't do that.
Great job and keep up the good work!
I like the bridge recolor that you did. Really enjoy it more than the dark version. And you re-vectored it very nicely!
The render is nice as well. The orange bokeh you have on top is prime as well. The only thing the orange did that I didn't like, was made the black edges of the render seem off. I would possibly recolor the render to darker colors for better contrast so that the bokeh wouldn't contrast him as much. Some parts have a little gray in it, maybe adjust the coloring (top right).
I overall like it a lot, I think it's very nice and simple, and I love simplicity.
Thanks! I appreciate it. I cant really do much about the colour, due to the render having an orange eye and scarf. I didn't put an airplane here tho...Quote:
Originally Posted by Trance
How did you know I've made a dark version of the background? Either you saw my Deviantart page or I just didn't remember I post it here earlier. Either way, thanks for your opinion. And I'll try and edit the picture accordingly.Quote:
Originally Posted by SheS3xyGirl
Areas to fix:
-Reduce overall brightness
-increase contrast/levels
-more vividness besides the orange
I agree the background is a little bright, but I like how you still made the render blend with the background! Aside from the background being on the brighter side.. It's very well done. Keep up the great work.
Wait @EpicKLF I thought it was an airplane. Never mind it's a bridge lol sorry.
What does those 2 chinese words mean.
Really nice picture.
It means Yukine (雪音) The name of the character in the picture.
Wtf omg, unbelievable skills.
9/10
Great skills man, keep up the great work.
Love it
Is it me or you over used the Topaz '-'
The background was already topaz-efied. It doesn't interrupt much though, except maybe the water...Quote:
Originally Posted by George
The Topaz ruins the whole wallpaper but overall it looks good.Quote:
Originally Posted by EpicKLF
I'd like to see the originial.
Since, this thread has been "redug" I'm going to fix it as I said 1 week ago so here:
http://puu.sh/7g4Wc/d68bcaf724.png
What original? If you're talking about the wallpaper it self? HereQuote:
Originally Posted by King Haze
You should find a new font.
This is excellent ;-;Quote:
Originally Posted by EpicKLF
I think the Font is fine.
Omg make me one plss!!
first one is better..
You have to vector out the character to fit the style of the bg. I like the first one better. If you wouldn't mind, give me a psd of the character on top of the BG in the first one unified(the character would be a layer) so I can edit him to show you what I mean. =) Up to you, of course, I don't steal work i'd just like to display my idea.
This is a very old piece. But i know what you meant by vector. you want the character to be flat and vectorized (or in this case. Topazified). I can't really give you the psd unless you really wanted it. I'm currently very busy in my studies. Hope you wouldn't mind yourself...Quote:
Originally Posted by SheS3xyGirl
Atleast you liked something...Quote:
Originally Posted by King Haze
The first one imo is better, just because of the blur. Don't get me wrong some pictures look much better with the blur and etc, but the edit has a bit too much added to it. Although I love the font and how you blurred that in the edit, I would say, Do another edit, without the blurred bridge and water, but with the blurred name, and I would give this a 10/10 for sure. Great work, keep at it.
Gotcha. Well Yeah vectored is what I mean. This could be one of the best walls I've seen in a long time. It's pleasant to the eye, and simple enough to not disturb as a bg.
Everybody has their own definition of "perfect" so it's only fair that different people prefer something that others don't. My personal Cnc on this piece is that the text ruins the whole thing completely and as you and many others mentioned. I blurred the edited version a bit too much. And because of that, ill try and re-edit this piece later.Quote:
Originally Posted by Bulbasaur
Thanks! Your compliment really means a lot! I am compelled to see what you wanted it to look like after your comment on "vectorizing it" so expect a Dropbox link to the psd soon.Quote:
Originally Posted by SheS3xyGirl
Awesome piece, I can see the sleepless hours behind this work, congratz!, you deserve a spot in the hard world of design ;)