2nd attempt at signature!

Hello. I made a second signature, maybe its a bit wierd but i liked to golden color because this girl has a golden clock too in the anime so xD
Maybe the light at the top is a bit to bright but i dont know about it so.
And i didnt knew what text to take and what text to type so i just picked one that maybe fits with it so. xD
CnC and tips are alweys welcome!

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Any comments are good!

you make signature very fast wtf

I'm not very good with kinda stuff but I fell like the render is lost

Her face is brighter than the sun, also the eyes look very weird like that, not in a good way, i like some of the other effects around the character tho

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Originally Posted by Opeth

you make signature very fast wtf

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It took me a few hours to do this so D: didnt do it that fast xD

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Originally Posted by Linzor

Her face is brighter than the sun, also the eyes look very weird like that, not in a good way, i like some of the other effects around the character tho

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Yea i know, i didnt knew how to fix the face, i am not that good in it yet.

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Originally Posted by Jordy

It took me a few hours to do this so D: didnt do it that fast xD

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try to spend more time, like days on the signature that you are working on, you will probably come with more ideas

Anime is gay.

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Originally Posted by Opeth

try to spend more time, like days on the signature that you are working on, you will probably come with more ideas

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I'll think about it xD

Okay there is a lot to CnC,
The signature is too plain---everything is the same,the colors,it doesn't blend.
The lighting---is only a little,like I can only tell the only lighting you put there is above the render,the render's pixels is broken because you used too much Burn Tool on him,I appreciate the blurred things but it still doesn't cope the random throws of yellowish fractals,you didn't use C4Ds too. The depth and flow is missing,everything about it is a mess. The text,I barely see it and I had to look again to see where your text is,the text placement is way off,the color doesn't fit anything and it is so small we need to dig to see it,the only thing that is perfect is that little nursey hat's color but that's it. Try more tutorials and you'll soon improve.

k00l

Looks good

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Originally Posted by Pharaoh

Okay there is a lot to CnC,
The signature is too plain---everything is the same,the colors,it doesn't blend.
The lighting---is only a little,like I can only tell the only lighting you put there is above the render,the render's pixels is broken because you used too much Burn Tool on him,I appreciate the blurred things but it still doesn't cope the random throws of yellowish fractals,you didn't use C4Ds too. The depth and flow is missing,everything about it is a mess. The text,I barely see it and I had to look again to see where your text is,the text placement is way off,the color doesn't fit anything and it is so small we need to dig to see it,the only thing that is perfect is that little nursey hat's color but that's it. Try more tutorials and you'll soon improve.

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Well thanks for the tips :p
I'll try to do more tutorials first.

so nice.. can you make me one? :)

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Originally Posted by Jordy

Hello. I made a second signature, maybe its a bit wierd but i liked to golden color because this girl has a golden clock too in the anime so xD
Maybe the light at the top is a bit to bright but i dont know about it so.
And i didnt knew what text to take and what text to type so i just picked one that maybe fits with it so. xD
CnC and tips are alweys welcome!

http://image.prntscr.com/image/10cff...532cc939e6.jpg

Pictures i used for it:
http://prntscr.com/ap0r6x
http://prntscr.com/ap0qyh
http://prntscr.com/ap0qdw
http://prntscr.com/ap0p8q
http://prntscr.com/ap0ovx
http://prntscr.com/ap0oj1
http://prntscr.com/ap0odz

Any comments are good!

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The signature itself looks quite okay, its not the best but not the worst either, i've seen and made much worse xD
On the points i suggest you to work on is coloration, balance and text.
the bubble effects are nice and all but they are too dense, try making them alittle bigger and spread out.
The text is just un readable, try a clean font like Arkhip or Telegrafico.
On the coloration i suggest you to give more diverse colors than just goldish yellow like... add some red into it or some natural colors for the face and the smoke like yellow smudges are quite nice if placed close to the render.
I hope you can see this as critisizm and not ego/bashing :P