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dat is veri sxc m8
too bright in the middle, thats all im gonna say
rest is gud
I don't really like the small dots around the render which you used probably to blend it?Quote:
Originally Posted by Vickachu
You could fix the light source, that one looks like ghay '-'
Those green C4D lines you putted on the render aren't really causing any flow at all.
You could use some C4D's behind the render, Gaussian blur 1.0-1.5px, erase parts from the render and put C4D's in the foreground to create depth.
Overall 2/10
Rule of thirds plox.