Psychadelic

I don't know feels off but I think I did a nice try

https://i.imgur.com/hOOxcHo.png

LQ, looks messy at spots, oversharpened on some spots, the 3D vision effect is wrong and doesn't match.
2/10 FTE..

3/10
Nice try but u need to get more clarity

tbh looks good even if it was your first try to make a psychedelic one i still can see it moving for some reason
but yeah theres some stuff needs to be fixed :)

It looks so good!!
keep up your good work :)

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Originally Posted by Pharaoh

I don't know feels off but I think I did a nice try

https://i.imgur.com/hOOxcHo.png

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I get what you're trying to accomplish but it doesn't work out.
The effects that you have placed on her just hurts my eyes. You could try to dim the effects and blend the bubble c4ds.
Besides that my eyes automaticly focus on the text pshyicadelic and I think the mean focus should be Yoko..

If you make a few more versions with the tips you've gotten from this thread, you could improve this piece by a lot!