Town 2.

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08-19-2015
jokerliwa24_

Town 2 (Freestyle GunZ Exclusive!)

Hello everyone , i would like to show you guys my map ,after working hard on it.
Town 2 Map by me.
with
-Player spawn
-Team deathmatch playerspawns 0-1
-Lightmapped.
Was working hard on this map for almost a week, had some bugs, i mean millions of bugs, fixed them.
-Tested too,
Hoping there's no bugs ingame anymore in my map.
Like if you appreciate my work ,that give's me support.
My other maps

Quote:

https://forum.ragezone.com/f496/rate-maps-1074088/

Video :

https://youtu.be/Z6FNViLQ9G0

Screenshots ingame with lightmap on :

Quote:

http://i.imgur.com/oPTJze2.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/zVjoK2m.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/JIPaGjf.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/whoXIxh.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/cbRMYbT.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/gHMsRQr.jpg

No lightmap on :

Quote:

http://i.imgur.com/H2hr6R9.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/1z5g4t9.jpg

Screenshot from the program :

Quote:

http://i.imgur.com/qI0TVdH.png

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The video shows more, these pictures doesn't show the entire map ingame.
and thanks for Watching & Reading, i'll be waiting for Dave or McSic to accept this map to be in FGunZ.

http://i.imgur.com/pTShLNf.png
https://freestylersworld.com/showthre...595#post818595
https://freestylersworld.com/showthre...l=1#post819432
08-19-2015
Opeth

add to fgunz plz?
08-19-2015
braazts

This

Quote:

Originally Posted by Opeth

add to fgunz plz?
08-19-2015
Eran

well agree I became bored from all the maps and I want new Maps anyway cuz I know here every map '-'
something new please? D:
08-19-2015
Amers

Original town still better but this is impressive
08-19-2015
Traumatiser

looks like a port + town mix could do with abit more work
08-20-2015
iDonatorCadi

Not bad, keep up the good work.
08-20-2015
Teleporter

keep up the good work.
08-20-2015
jokerliwa24_

Thanks all, & if Freestyle GunZ want's to add this map, i'll give it to them.
08-20-2015
Ommadawn

Great work, I like it.
08-20-2015
ijramist

Good job :D
Should be added in fgunz.
Keep the nice work up ;) I really like it
08-20-2015
mhmd

owow its coool its like town +port
good job Keep going man
We want new maps !
Great worl

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owow its coool its like town +port
good job Keep going man
We want new maps !
Great worl
08-20-2015
Colour

Could use an actual background (instead of just the black) + I don't like the ground texture. Overall not bad looking.
08-20-2015
jokerliwa24_

Quote:

Originally Posted by Colour

Could use an actual background (instead of just the black) + I don't like the ground texture. Overall not bad looking.

http://i.imgur.com/2BhNLPe.jpg
I already changed the Ground Texture, Thanks for your feedback!
08-20-2015
Taint

apart from your pathetic attempts at seeking attention and farming thanks, im not amused by it like the others and i feel like its some poor effort thats been poured onto this one, looks okay, but still terrible at some points
08-20-2015
jokerliwa24_

For the above two people , Thanks for the feedback!
08-20-2015
Jetman

I mean it doesn't look bad, but there's some obvious issues with it that I'll point out so you can fix.

1. Lightcrashes : The parts of the map that should be lit, are completely black. This is b/c GTK's plugin + fsrad's lightmap generation are bad, and cause many issues apart from just light crashes.

2. Textures aren't set properly : Screenshot 3 shows this best, you see half a window, and 3/4 of a window b/c the texture was either 1 not locked before moving, or 2 wasn't applied carefully, all textures like that one need to be fixed.

3. The first error is going to be hard to fix b/c FSRAD is horrible for lightmapping, your best bet is to switch over to 3ds.
08-20-2015
Amers

Quote:

Originally Posted by Taint

apart from your pathetic attempts at seeking attention and farming thanks, im not amused by it like the others and i feel like its some poor effort thats been poured onto this one, looks okay, but still terrible at some points

Someones jealous of a person getting likes.

Better editor than Taint, or should i say Better map maker than Taint.

Quote:

Originally Posted by jokerliwa24_

http://i.imgur.com/2BhNLPe.jpg
I already changed the Ground Texture, Thanks for your feedback!

make the map day like town the night ruins it for me.
08-20-2015
jokerliwa24_

Quote:

Originally Posted by Amers

Someones jealous of a person getting likes.

Better editor than Taint, or should i say Better map maker than Taint.

make the map day like town the night ruins it for me.

You can turn light map on ingame for that mate.
08-20-2015
Taint

Quote:

Originally Posted by Amers

Someones jealous of a person getting likes.

Better editor than Taint, or should i say Better map maker than Taint.

make the map day like town the night ruins it for me.

criticism is not jealusy you fool
08-20-2015
Colour

Okay i missed the video the first time around so I got some more feedback.

http://i.imgur.com/g7zuXcY.png
http://i.imgur.com/EtaH66R.png
These don't really match the walls textures, which looks rather weird.

http://i.imgur.com/LyD5snO.png
The sideways boxes textures are way different from the box standing to the left, which again looks misplaced.

http://i.imgur.com/PN1pbhS.png
http://i.imgur.com/PvM4WgA.png
What do these even represent?

http://i.imgur.com/N8WHGKq.png
Maybe it's best to just get rid of these? They really do not seem to serve a purpose and look out of place.

http://i.imgur.com/nUOnxFS.png
That feels like it would be better to place it behind the building (the other one on the other side would move a bit to the left too of course).

That's about it. It's just some input from my point of view, if anyone disagrees it's fine.
08-20-2015
jokerliwa24_

Quote:

Originally Posted by Colour

Okay i missed the video the first time around so I got some more feedback.

http://i.imgur.com/g7zuXcY.png
http://i.imgur.com/EtaH66R.png
These don't really match the walls textures, which looks rather weird.

http://i.imgur.com/LyD5snO.png
The sideways boxes textures are way different from the box standing to the left, which again looks misplaced.

http://i.imgur.com/PN1pbhS.png
http://i.imgur.com/PvM4WgA.png
What do these even represent?

http://i.imgur.com/N8WHGKq.png
Maybe it's best to just get rid of these? They really do not seem to serve a purpose and look out of place.

http://i.imgur.com/nUOnxFS.png
That feels like it would be better to place it behind the building (the other one on the other side would move a bit to the left too of course).

That's about it. It's just some input from my point of view, if anyone disagrees it's fine.

Alright thanks for your feedback, ill work on them now and update this.
08-20-2015
StephanM

Town sky..?
08-20-2015
Bunny

not sure i understand the first screenshot theres just emptyness between the houses
http://puu.sh/jIscY/e82398100b.jpg
other than that, looking forward for dis to be added in ze game :3
08-20-2015
StephanM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bunnys

not sure i understand the first screenshot theres just emptyness between the houses
http://puu.sh/jIscY/e82398100b.jpg
other than that, looking forward for dis to be added in ze game :3

Cause of the horrible lightmapping.
08-22-2015
jokerliwa24_

http://i.imgur.com/pTShLNf.png

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jetman

I mean it doesn't look bad, but there's some obvious issues with it that I'll point out so you can fix.

1. Lightcrashes : The parts of the map that should be lit, are completely black. This is b/c GTK's plugin + fsrad's lightmap generation are bad, and cause many issues apart from just light crashes.

2. Textures aren't set properly : Screenshot 3 shows this best, you see half a window, and 3/4 of a window b/c the texture was either 1 not locked before moving, or 2 wasn't applied carefully, all textures like that one need to be fixed.

3. The first error is going to be hard to fix b/c FSRAD is horrible for lightmapping, your best bet is to switch over to 3ds.

1. I need help in LightMap for GTK Radiant Fsrad for now and if anyone can help me contact me at Skype: Griefhawk0
2. All the textures has been fixed. http://i.imgur.com/USiHxR7.jpg
3. I'm looking for 3ds Max GunZ Plugins, If anyone can help me finding one, please contact me at Skype : ^^^^^^^

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Colour

Okay i missed the video the first time around so I got some more feedback.

http://i.imgur.com/g7zuXcY.png
http://i.imgur.com/EtaH66R.png
These don't really match the walls textures, which looks rather weird.

http://i.imgur.com/LyD5snO.png
The sideways boxes textures are way different from the box standing to the left, which again looks misplaced.

http://i.imgur.com/PN1pbhS.png
http://i.imgur.com/PvM4WgA.png
What do these even represent?

http://i.imgur.com/N8WHGKq.png
Maybe it's best to just get rid of these? They really do not seem to serve a purpose and look out of place.

http://i.imgur.com/nUOnxFS.png
That feels like it would be better to place it behind the building (the other one on the other side would move a bit to the left too of course).

That's about it. It's just some input from my point of view, if anyone disagrees it's fine.

http://i.imgur.com/g7zuXcY.png-Retextured. http://imgur.com/qn7R0QG.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/EtaH66R.png-Retextured. http://imgur.com/ijbClN7.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/LyD5snO.png-Retextured. http://imgur.com/66peWAi.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/PN1pbhS.png-Retextured & Resized. http://imgur.com/tPoV2o0.jpg (Chairs)
http://i.imgur.com/PvM4WgA.png-Retextured & Resized. http://i.imgur.com/JJvDE2m.jpg (Chairs)
http://i.imgur.com/N8WHGKq.png-Removed. http://imgur.com/DsNkhEF.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/nUOnxFS.png-Retextured only, because i like it that way, also to make the map not so empty and simple. http://i.imgur.com/fRf5t2f.jpg

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Quote:

Originally Posted by StephanM

Town sky..?

Don't know how to do that, If you can help me please contact me on Skype.

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Extra updates :
1- http://imgur.com/ouXxaR8.jpg
2- http://imgur.com/PSIpkhq.jpg
3- http://imgur.com/E0YtmJF.jpg
4- http://i.imgur.com/TRS0VG4.jpg
5- http://i.imgur.com/gfjDFd5.jpg

-Thanks all for your feedback!
08-22-2015
jokerliwa24_

I think i'm gonna stop with Town 2 for a while till i get the LightMap bug fixed, What map do you think i should do next?

Maps already done :
1-AngryBird
2-EventMap (DieByNade)
3-EventMap (Last Man Standing)
4-EventMap (Wall 2 Wall)
5-Easy Skill map
6-Team Deathmatch
7-Duel Map
8-Town 2 (Problems)

(Stick this post with the above post please)
08-22-2015
Michi

Well before moving on perfect this one. And if you get decent enough you should probably apply for being a map developer :]
08-22-2015
jokerliwa24_

Quote:

Originally Posted by Michi

Well before moving on perfect this one. And if you get decent enough you should probably apply for being a map developer :]

I don't think Freestyle GunZ needs a Map Developer but it's worth a try, maybe.
08-22-2015
Michi

Quote:

Originally Posted by jokerliwa24_

I don't think Freestyle GunZ needs a Map Developer but it's worth a try, maybe.

http://puu.sh/jK2f9/5a2bf594d7.png
08-22-2015
StephanM

Look at your lamp post textures again and compare it with the original Town.
As for the sky -> decompile town -> copy elu+ani file + some xml code -> paste it in your Town2 folder and compile.

But I am not going to in too much detail since I do not support radiant made maps.
08-22-2015
jokerliwa24_

Guys, What do you think i should make next? Post here or pm me and ill try to do it.
08-22-2015
StephanM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jokerliwa24_

Guys, What do you think i should make next? Post here or pm me and ill try to do it.

Remake your maps in 3DS max. :o.o
08-22-2015
jokerliwa24_

Quote:

Originally Posted by StephanM

Remake your maps in 3DS max. :o.o

Give me plugins and tell me the main stuff to use in 3DS max , and ill do it, contact me in skype please : Griefhawk0
08-22-2015
Ranger

i like it map with Light .: )
08-22-2015
Eran

can you add some car to this map like in the old town please (this: http://i.imgur.com/Wk9iOyL.jpg )
idk...
08-22-2015
Corrupt

Become developer?
08-22-2015
jokerliwa24_

Quote:

Originally Posted by MoltenLava

can you add some car to this map like in the old town please (this: http://i.imgur.com/Wk9iOyL.jpg )
idk...

I will if i got Car's textures + i will try to make a good tree and keep it ( Do you think its a good idea? ) + I'm working on the lightmap, I'm trying to fix it!
- If you got some good textures about town cars please send them to me in Pm or Skype : Griefhawk0
08-22-2015
Gummi

Big ass town map
+1
08-22-2015
HellSniper

Quote:

Originally Posted by jokerliwa24_

1. I need help in LightMap for GTK Radiant Fsrad for now

Most likely caused by your min/max uv resolution set in your fsrad settings, also create a global illumination setup to soften shadows.

Quote:

Originally Posted by jokerliwa24_

I'm looking for 3ds Max GunZ Plugins, If anyone can help me finding one

Quote:

Originally Posted by jokerliwa24_

Give me plugins and tell me the main stuff to use in 3DS max , and ill do it, contact me in skype please : Griefhawk0

I recently uploaded the 2010 32bit version on ragezone, you can basically find every information you need on ragezone provided by me and wucas if minor digging is done.

And no i wont add/contact you on skype.
08-22-2015
jokerliwa24_

Quote:

Originally Posted by HellSniper

Most likely caused by your min/max uv resolution set in your fsrad settings, also create a global illumination setup to soften shadows.

I recently uploaded the 2010 32bit version on ragezone, you can basically find every information you need on ragezone provided by me and wucas if minor digging is done.

And no i wont add/contact you on skype.

Light map already fixed , Thanks tho <3
Now thinking of adding trees & car.
08-24-2015
jokerliwa24_

http://i.imgur.com/pTShLNf.png

-LightMap Fixed.
-Trees Added.
Everything works fine now.
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Decided to name it NightTown (V1)

Preview :
https://youtu.be/-KN12nWRP-Q
08-24-2015
StephanM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jokerliwa24_

http://i.imgur.com/pTShLNf.png

-LightMap Fixed.
-Trees Added.
Everything works fine now.
+
Decided to name it NightTown (V1)

Preview :
https://youtu.be/-KN12nWRP-Q

Trees are off.
Some boxes are off in scaling.
Big tower is off in scaling / texturing.
You should work more on the scaling on the map if you want to to make it somewhat of a "decent" map made with radiant, but I suggest to drop it overall and start over in 3D.
08-24-2015
Taint

Quote:

Originally Posted by StephanM

Trees are off.
Some boxes are off in scaling.
Big tower is off in scaling / texturing.
You should work more on the scaling on the map if you want to to make it somewhat of a "decent" map made with radiant, but I suggest to drop it overall and start over in 3D.

Add to that the lighting is so fkn weird
I see you complaining in the chatbox @joker
Let me tell you, if you cant take criticism from any of us you surely shouldnt be on the internet, dont expect any praises for some poor efforts you've already put onto this map, honesty is brutal but hell im not gonna sugar coat something you havent done well

Some objects make no sense in the map as well btw, im on my phone so i cant point them out
And basically what stephan said is true
08-24-2015
SecretsOTheP

I think the map would look so much better if redone in Max. Personal opinion. The lighting looks very fake.
08-24-2015
Michi

I saw somewhere earlier in which the roads were just a random texture, they should match the actual roads in 'town'.
08-24-2015
jokerliwa24_

Quote:

Originally Posted by Michi

I saw somewhere earlier in which the roads were just a random texture, they should match the actual roads in 'town'.

I fixed the ground texture + i don't want it exactly like town + i got 2 extra ground textures but i don't know if i should add them. ill add them later and ask for you guys if i should add it or no.
08-24-2015
Pharaoh

Good job.
08-24-2015
Amers

Quote:

Originally Posted by jokerliwa24_

http://i.imgur.com/pTShLNf.png

-LightMap Fixed.
-Trees Added.
Everything works fine now.
+
Decided to name it NightTown (V1)

Preview :
https://youtu.be/-KN12nWRP-Q

What the hell is all of the random boxes about, trees are really weird and just don't go with the map, you should add lamps instead of the trees.
if you'd add the original towns sky take some of the boxes away it would be really good.

My rating:
4/10
08-24-2015
jokerliwa24_

Quote:

Originally Posted by Amers

What the hell is all of the random boxes about, trees are really weird and just don't go with the map, you should add lamps instead of the trees.
if you'd add the original towns sky take some of the boxes away it would be really good.

My rating:
4/10

I'll replace the tree's with lamps, Can't add sky , Which boxes in the map exactly do you want me to remove ? Please send me screenshots from my youtube video, and thanks for your feedback!

- - - Updated - - -

Quote:

Originally Posted by Buddhism

looks horrible this is my opinion stop deleting it thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I never deleted your post + I can't do that, Thanks for your feedback!
08-24-2015
Amers

[QUOTE=jokerliwa24_;819496]I'll replace the tree's with lamps, Can't add sky , Which boxes in the map exactly do you want me to remove ? Please send me screenshots from my youtube video, and thanks for your feedback!
If you send me the map i can tell you what you should edit.
if you don't want to release it right now, you can pm me!
08-24-2015
StephanM

Follow this to get your town sky added (instead of using beserker files you use the files from town).
http://gzmap.sourceforge.net/forums/...php?f=4&t=1014
08-31-2015
Zachary

Quote:

Originally Posted by jokerliwa24_

i'll be waiting for Dave or McSic to accept this map to be in FGunZ

I really like your work, I do. Although the ground/floor looks really odd to me, not sure why.
Another thing (I personally saw) that I'm pointing out is the random staircase/alley "thing" on your map. (Scene 0:06 - 0:10 in the video). I don't really understand the point of adding this, especially since it doesn't go anywhere. It would have been a bit better if it somehow connected to the main clock centre (from one of the corners).
The last thing I'd like to comment on is more of a question. I'm confused as to where you would be placing the spawns in this map, I understand that one of the spawns could be where you are during (Scene 0:40 - 0:46 in the video) but I don't really know where the other spawn would go. If you suggest beside/near the clock tower, it would 100% way too easy for people to simply dash to the wall and two air ventilation filers (2 grey circle thingies) and snipe or potshot.

All in all, I wish the map would be bigger with a tiny bit more work added on. You also claimed that this took you "almost" a week, that's not a lot of time spent on something you would want on a pserver '-' Keep up with the map making.

Anyways. I just have a few concerns/comments about what I quoted you on...

I've known you from other servers (been a staff member with you on a few) and I do know that you tend to be on several servers. It's quite rare for us to see someone post their work like this and just assume Dave/McSic will add it. I also understand that you have told me that you were planning on making your own server (it even gives it away on your Skype motto..) If you do so, then I highly doubt we'd be adding this map to FGunZ, simply because players who play on your server and ours, will say things such as "you stole it from FG" or "FG stole this map from you", either way, the server would get a bad reputation in the fact that this map belongs to you and we have it, or vice versa. I also understand that

Please keep in mind that this is not at all an "attack" or a "hate-post", I'm simply just stating what I see as a player who would use this map.
09-14-2015
braazts

So what happend :D?
09-15-2015
StephanM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Penguin pls

So what happend :D?

Pretty sure Dave did not want it.