My Debut Music Video

Hello everyone ! Not sure who remembers this good olll midgen, but if you do remember me, what's up ! Long time no see. Glad to see this pandemic hasn't ruined the community and there's still a player base. I've been away for a while due to my laptop going RIP and my PC being very old and outdated (can't do much besides a limited internet experience). But now thanks to a good ollll stimulus check, I can go grab a new laptop this upcoming week and I'm looking to get back into the community again thankfully.

On topic:
I've returned with a present for you all ! I just released my debut music video to my song called In My Zone today. It's out now on YouTube and it would mean a lot if you went to show love/hate/whatever pleases you. I'm so excited I get to share this with the world now. If you'd like to watch my video:

https://youtu.be/vOeqAUV5Zr8


Great to be back and see some familiar names again ! Missed you guys :3

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I never listen to this type of music, but it sounds professional! nice1 fam

Nice to see you again Eddie,
This is indeed a nice gift to gift us Kappa

On topic : (First listen review)
I liked the video and display, was nice.
I honestly wouldn't listen to this twice, its not that catchy and I felt like it was slow at times,
Your voice has some cracks here and there, I'm not sure if that's how you wanted it to sound (?)
You can definitely keep producing more songs and your tone with the words you spit out will be much better with practice
Maybe the way you sound is fine, just need to get used to the rhythms and speed of spitting
Some parts of the song were really good though, I don't think I liked the intro though, I felt it was long af
I ain't no professional critique, though one thing is for sure, the more I play the song the better it gets ( i honestly didn't like at all first time, but the more I listen
the better it gets)
Honestly the more I play it the better it gets, so that's awesome ;)
Anyway, keep grinding Eddie! It will pay off and you'll improve :4

Looks and sounds good! good luck :) (I do feel like your rap should be a bit faster tho)

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Originally Posted by Hulk

Nice to see you again Eddie,
This is indeed a nice gift to gift us Kappa

On topic : (First listen review)
I liked the video and display, was nice.
I honestly wouldn't listen to this twice, its not that catchy and I felt like it was slow at times,
Your voice has some cracks here and there, I'm not sure if that's how you wanted it to sound (?)
You can definitely keep producing more songs and your tone with the words you spit out will be much better with practice
Maybe the way you sound is fine, just need to get used to the rhythms and speed of spitting
Some parts of the song were really good though, I don't think I liked the intro though, I felt it was long af
I ain't no professional critique, though one thing is for sure, the more I play the song the better it gets ( i honestly didn't like at all first time, but the more I listen
the better it gets)
Honestly the more I play it the better it gets, so that's awesome ;)
Anyway, keep grinding Eddie! It will pay off and you'll improve :4

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Originally Posted by Mia

Looks and sounds good! good luck :) (I do feel like your rap should be a bit faster tho)

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Thank you for your feedback my bibi love tings <3 So this song was actually recorded and initially released in February 2019. The video process was recorded and edited recently. I've improved a lot since then and this song I was also trying something different with the flow. It makes sense in the beatboxing world (if I were to "drop a beat" as an example it'd make more sense), so I wanted to try to fuse what I did with beatboxing with the rapping. I look back months later now and I agree I could've executed the flow a bit differently. The flow was basically supposed to create a "fading out" kind of effect where I make your body movements slow down as you're moving along to the beat/song. Just needed to be executed differently since some spots ended up awkward. Live and learn ^_^

If this type of music is what you prefer, I have music on all streaming platforms under the name AbsirdsTheWord with all different flows and vibes to the songs.

Again, appreciate all the feedback from everyone !

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Originally Posted by Eddie

Thank you for your feedback my bibi love tings <3 So this song was actually recorded and initially released in February 2019. The video process was recorded and edited recently. I've improved a lot since then and this song I was also trying something different with the flow. It makes sense in the beatboxing world (if I were to "drop a beat" as an example it'd make more sense), so I wanted to try to fuse what I did with beatboxing with the rapping. I look back months later now and I agree I could've executed the flow a bit differently. The flow was basically supposed to create a "fading out" kind of effect where I make your body movements slow down as you're moving along to the beat/song. Just needed to be executed differently since some spots ended up awkward. Live and learn ^_^

If this type of music is what you prefer, I have music on all streaming platforms under the name AbsirdsTheWord with all different flows and vibes to the songs.

Again, appreciate all the feedback from everyone !

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aTY0...AbsirdsTheWord
I like the flow on this song its fire, it felt missing something small though that would make it perfect

DAYUMMM ! Slaying :4 .. Good luck mate !~

Not my music genre but is it really cool to see you giving it a shot, the video editing is cool but has some cheap moments/look with not everything flowing over properly (after the box with play pops, the next frame still shows the letter P in the middle for example or when the goat figure guy holds your head it looks semi cheap), for for a first video it is really nice and cool.
The more you release the better it will become!

What I do like is that I can actually hear what you are sining/rapping/what ever you want to call it, often with this kind of music a lot of words are mumbled etc. so I would suggest to keep this as your style, clear words.

Free sub and like cause we have to support a fellow OG Freestyler!


P.S. I like the hairband rock!

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Originally Posted by Eddie

Hello everyone ! Not sure who remembers this good olll midgen, but if you do remember me, what's up ! Long time no see. Glad to see this pandemic hasn't ruined the community and there's still a player base. I've been away for a while due to my laptop going RIP and my PC being very old and outdated (can't do much besides a limited internet experience). But now thanks to a good ollll stimulus check, I can go grab a new laptop this upcoming week and I'm looking to get back into the community again thankfully.

On topic:
I've returned with a present for you all ! I just released my debut music video to my song called In My Zone today. It's out now on YouTube and it would mean a lot if you went to show love/hate/whatever pleases you. I'm so excited I get to share this with the world now. If you'd like to watch my video:

https://youtu.be/vOeqAUV5Zr8


Great to be back and see some familiar names again ! Missed you guys :3

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Dude longtime no see!
I see u made some big progress in ur raps and beard lolzzz
Keep going m8 hope to see u soon ingame again. ;)

Greetz LadyRose

Idek you and I'm very picky when it comes to rap, but this is pretty good for a beginner! Keep it up

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you have a serious talent in you i expect a greater things of you in 2021 thats gonna be your year

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Originally Posted by Eddie

Hello everyone ! Not sure who remembers this good olll midgen, but if you do remember me, what's up ! Long time no see. Glad to see this pandemic hasn't ruined the community and there's still a player base. I've been away for a while due to my laptop going RIP and my PC being very old and outdated (can't do much besides a limited internet experience). But now thanks to a good ollll stimulus check, I can go grab a new laptop this upcoming week and I'm looking to get back into the community again thankfully.

On topic:
I've returned with a present for you all ! I just released my debut music video to my song called In My Zone today. It's out now on YouTube and it would mean a lot if you went to show love/hate/whatever pleases you. I'm so excited I get to share this with the world now. If you'd like to watch my video:

https://youtu.be/vOeqAUV5Zr8


Great to be back and see some familiar names again ! Missed you guys :3

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yoooooooo

This was ****in awesome bruh I remember checking out your music a bit back and this is like clean as **** ! Always believed in you champ, good to see you back again !