Signature : Fading Away

http://i50.tinypic.com/otj6mh.jpg

Hope you like it, tell me what I can do better. :)
Please only rate the Pic, dun rate it bad cuz u dun like me Ingame. :(

C n C!

I don't actually see something fading away, right? o_O

Well, didn't get better title :)
Well. :D

1. Too big, maybe a LITTTLEE smaller.
2. I like what you did with the text there, especially that HD bit.
3. I see what you'r trying to do, it's very simple, which makes it an easy to notice signature.
4. Background wasn't such a strong point.


It's fine, just keep making more to improve.

I dont rate. -_-

-1 Bad placement of the text, Try placing it near the render so it doesn't take away the vocal
-1 Horrible effects on the text, Try to blend it in or use a Clipping mask.
-1 i hate those square's, Personal feeling so don't have a tip.
-1 Looks like the render is pasted on the canvas, So try to blend it in with smudge etc.
-1 Too big for a signature, i suggest 400x150/400x200 perfect sizes imo.
-1 Bad light source it's placed on the wrong side of the render and in the middle of the tag.
-1 The colors, they don't really match eachother, use gradient maps.
-1 The copy pasted render and lowered opacity imo killed it even more, when you try to make such an effect use Motion blur. That's imo the best.
+1 Nice flow

wich leads to a final of 3/10

Sorry better luck next time mate ^^