Trying my best - feedback please

Hello, this is my 2nd attempt please do rate 1-10
https://i.imgur.com/nHgnOGW.jpg
Render link: https://imgur.com/a/Wl2nAfB
Font Name: Forever7

Better than last one though, keep working :)

Hi Faky it looks good my man keep going and you'll just improve each time.

your link to the render is not correct.

Good attempt. I don't usually comment but here's some info, the character doesn't blend in with the background well, the theme is fine but the colours used on the character do not blend with the background. Also the style of the background, which is like an oil painting I'm guessing, doesn't go well with animated characters. Try designing a different background, keep the render, and set a fixed colour scheme for the background that matches the render.

That looks nice, good job.

my opinion is the colour scheme looks really nice

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Originally Posted by Bunny

your link to the render is not correct.

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I tried to cover text from background image, ok i need to blind it with bg.

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Originally Posted by #1Chef

Good attempt. I don't usually comment but here's some info, the character doesn't blend in with the background well, the theme is fine but the colours used on the character do not blend with the background. Also the style of the background, which is like an oil painting I'm guessing, doesn't go well with animated characters. Try designing a different background, keep the render, and set a fixed colour scheme for the background that matches the render.

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Noted mistakes and i will work on it.

Good job, i like it.

Now you now how to make it