Besides the fact that you're map just looks pretty bad, you're also pretty full of yourself. I really wonder how old you are and what your mental state is lol. You're going to release something...

Seriously start being such a moron and accept that you made some mistakes.

http://i42.tinypic.com/29qnqdy.jpg

Besides this I also noticed that every door you use is an outside door....

I meant both doors to be open. Maybe your highschool was made that way, but I'm pretty sure they don't make these kinda bricks this big nowadays. Besides the fact that its pretty rough, so also...

You should work on your proportions and textures.

Let me sum some things up:
-The door height seems alright, the wall starting above the door is about 1.5 times as big as the door itself,...