Maybe lower your contrast a bit, a lot of your whites are overexposed and lost. Also, the type is lost in the placement you gave it. The overall complexity of the bottom right quadrant is too much for the type to integrate unopposed.
Also note that the bottom right is the second most unimportant area in the composition, so putting type there will make it automatically fade in importance. By placing it in the upper register, it will have more importance thus making it stand by itself much easier.
