My first time using photoshop, my signature :)

[Tslash]

make one for me, if u want ;]

choose the render and font and i'll say if i like it

okay , ill do that

[Devil]

the render or maybe the "cartoonish shadow" are pixelized, and that doesnt make a good impress.
the script is nice but i don't get those things on the top of them..
you could use some c4ds and effects for the background cuz it looks like its made with paint.

~im honest, no ego (:

keep trying, and use those tips.