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    Random design I came up with, started off with just a triangle, then the ideas kept popping in my head. CnC is welcome of course, if there any things I can do to improve it feel free to point it out I want to make another version of this design if possible.

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    Last edited by #1Chef; 02-02-2017 at 07:31 AM.



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    the only cnc i can give you is uninstall photoshop asap cause this is str8 garbage yo

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    Originally Posted by Traumatiser View Post
    the only cnc i can give you is uninstall photoshop asap cause this is str8 garbage yo
    lol i cant breathe

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    Originally Posted by Pigglet View Post
    lol i cant breathe
    Stop smoking bacon then.

    OT; It's kinda empty and just doesnt match

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    Originally Posted by Traumatiser View Post
    the only cnc i can give you is uninstall photoshop asap cause this is str8 garbage yo
    You're always so nice amigo

    Originally Posted by Pigglet View Post
    lol i cant breathe
    You made a great contribution to the thread with that post (:

    Originally Posted by Mike View Post
    OT; It's kinda empty and just doesnt match
    Empty, eh well I didn't know what to add, that's why I want to make another version of it.
    Doesn't match, in terms of colors or aspects of the design itself? I tried playing around with the colors but couldn't get a good mix.



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    It's nice Basem, keep going <3

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    Not bad. Plenty of stuff you could work on for example,

    1. The colors don't go well together. Looks like you just slapped the triangles on top a background.

    2. Too much empty space, I recommend making the image smaller and cropping the sides a bit so it doesn't look as empty.

    3. I don't really like the lighting where it's placed at at the moment. It takes attention away from the triangles.

    4. IMO I would dim the background up so the triangles pop out more.

    5. I like how you made the triangles transparent but I feel as if they are TOO transparent.

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    Wonder why you kept the lighting/curling stuff on the diamonds (triangles) of the green one red, the red one is all red (light and dark), while the green one is green with the red stuff instead of lighter or darker green.

    Also I'd leave out the random white transparent brush wipes from the piece, it is too random lol.

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    Originally Posted by Traumatiser View Post
    the only cnc i can give you is uninstall photoshop asap cause this is str8 garbage yo
    my thoughts exactly

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    Originally Posted by YourStar View Post
    It's nice Basem, keep going <3
    Thanks

    Originally Posted by Skull View Post
    Not bad. Plenty of stuff you could work on for example,

    1. The colors don't go well together. Looks like you just slapped the triangles on top a background.

    2. Too much empty space, I recommend making the image smaller and cropping the sides a bit so it doesn't look as empty.

    3. I don't really like the lighting where it's placed at at the moment. It takes attention away from the triangles.

    4. IMO I would dim the background up so the triangles pop out more.

    5. I like how you made the triangles transparent but I feel as if they are TOO transparent.
    1. all the aspects I made myself, I agree and as I said I tried different color mixes but didn't work out, so if you have any suggestions to help feel free to post them.

    2. If I were to add things what would I add in your opinion?

    3. Yeah it's a bit much, if I had ideas for other things to add to the design I wanted to remove the lightning.

    4&5. I'll try it out. Yeah the middle ones perhaps.

    Originally Posted by StephanM View Post
    Wonder why you kept the lighting/curling stuff on the diamonds (triangles) of the green one red, the red one is all red (light and dark), while the green one is green with the red stuff instead of lighter or darker green.

    Also I'd leave out the random white transparent brush wipes from the piece, it is too random lol.
    Seemed like the triangles were too plain. The random wipes I feel as though they fill the design up a bit.

    Originally Posted by Overdrive View Post
    my thoughts exactly
    You made a great contribution to the thread with that post!



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