Bolt

[Colour]

You could add clouds instead of the white brush wipes?

Maybe asymetrical lightning (it looks too mirrored overall as it is now).

Also agree with StephanM that lighter green would've looked better in the diamonds.

Overall not that bad for a random design you came up with

[StephanM]

Seemed like the triangles were too plain. The random wipes I feel as though they fill the design up a bit.

I am talking about the white stuff (that you can hardly see) around it, that could be left out.
The stuff on the triangles/diamonds could be the same colour as the background of the triangles/diamonds (like you did with the red ones).

[#1Chef]

You could add clouds instead of the white brush wipes?

Maybe asymetrical lightning (it looks too mirrored overall as it is now).

Also agree with StephanM that lighter green would've looked better in the diamonds.

Overall not that bad for a random design you came up with

I could try making some clouds and remove those swipes near the center I guess. I'll play around with the colors again and see what I get with the diamonds.

I am talking about the white stuff (that you can hardly see) around it, that could be left out.
The stuff on the triangles/diamonds could be the same colour as the background of the triangles/diamonds (like you did with the red ones).

Ah ok, I'll see what I come up with. Got some ideas now and I'll work on a new version of the design soon.

[GeorgeGFX]

Opened on request.

[EASTVAN]

http://i.imgur.com/hqQhZiw.png

Random design I came up with, started off with just a triangle, then the ideas kept popping in my head. CnC is welcome of course, if there any things I can do to improve it feel free to point it out I want to make another version of this design if possible.

http://i.imgur.com/nAsrYhX.jpg

Personally, I think your colour needs some work. From the things I can see on display right now, they kind of seem off.
May just be personal preference, but I think the saturation maybe? I forget exactly how that and depth perception work together..
Uh........luminescence yeah....that coupled with saturation..

I think it would look good with contrast..not sure if you should do top or bottom, though..
Looks like too many dots at the top to me haha
and well the lightning effects are nice...

there's just something missing that makes it whole
i think its contrast, or maybe the dimension of the work

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lol i cant breathe

see like this and breath-taking haha
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[#1Chef]

Ehh, wasn't really planning on posting since I found some improvements I could make but since George re-opened the thread I guess I'll post the revamp of the design so far, going to be a while before I work on PS again so if there are any improvements you feel should be made definitely feel free to post them and I'll work on it once I get back to PS. (I know the center needs to be aligned, will do so when I get back to this design.)

[EASTVAN]

Ehh, wasn't really planning on posting since I found some improvements I could make but since George re-opened the thread I guess I'll post the revamp of the design so far, going to be a while before I work on PS again so if there are any improvements you feel should be made definitely feel free to post them and I'll work on it once I get back to PS. (I know the center needs to be aligned, will do so when I get back to this design.)

http://i.imgur.com/YuVEbGm.jpg

I like the effect you have at the bottom, flowering..at the root of it..
Well, I still think you should create more of a contrast, or try and add object depth.
What I mean is make the diamonds stand out against the background, maybe try adding some kind of shadowing effect, not too sure, never used PS

I think either that, or maybe you could add some peripheral kind of work around the core diamonds, star-esque shape...or make it smaller and then add effects...

The thing about it, while it looks good in theory, it gets boring fast..
To captivate, I'd work on what I suggested, among any thing else you discover..

All said with sincere intentions.

Thanks for sharing your work with us. ^_^

Edit: I think a deep blue or gradient from a medium coolish colour to deep blue at the top would contrast the stars and contrast and complement the whole piece nicely

[#1Chef]

Revamped again. Want to fill in the triangle in the centre, tried different things just didn't work out well, if anyone has any ideas feel free to post.

Edit: Filled it in with a lil somethin'