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    i called it "hot" wallpaper to make this thread look more attractice, and well look at this everybody got caught in my trap.
    now back On-topic again please? ty.

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    Why is there a white blur by the end of her hair?
    The lighting is off as well as the splashes and her left hand looking odd O_o.
    Other than that the colours are pretty spot on.
    Maybe work on the composition aswell?

    8/10 concept
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    Originally Posted by digi View Post
    Why is there a white blur by the end of her hair?
    The lighting is off as well as the splashes and her left hand looking odd O_o.
    Other than that the colours are pretty spot on.
    Maybe work on the composition aswell?

    8/10 concept
    6/10 execution

    ^_^
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    ye i knew about those things u mentioned, but it simply was way too hard for me to be able to fix it. the render simply was badly cut and i managed to fix some parts but not all of it that's why i made a lighting at her hair but i guess that failed.

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    Originally Posted by Insäne View Post
    to put some credit to myself O.O?
    But why there, why didn't you move it like a few pixels up to keep it out of the border. This looks so strane o_o.
    Male 1: "check out this paki he's doing a donut in his car"
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    Originally Posted by Subwoofer View Post
    But why there, why didn't you move it like a few pixels up to keep it out of the border. This looks so strane o_o.
    Because, i have NO idea i just typed dragged it and kept it for granted didn't really care about the placement.

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