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    Resort's Avatar Aloha

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    I'm learning digital drawing / painting, specifically concept art of environments and that sort of thing.

    This is what I have so far of my first piece, I don't know if it's really finished, I need to find out what else I can do. It's not amazing but i'm learning and developing my drawing / painting skills. Since this is my first piece it's sort of an experimental one. I'm aware that it looks kind of rough.



    Tell me what you think. Harsh criticism is appreciated.

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    This is what it looked like at the end of the first time I sat down and started it, the image above is how it looks now (the second time I worked on it)



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    Last edited by Resort; 03-16-2017 at 03:25 AM.

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    Very bad. Needs a lot of work. The lighting is way off. Very dark in some areas. It's a no from me.

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    I think it's very nice for a beginner Jess, keep going

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    No way you drew this from the first time ***** I'm jealous

    >>> Credits to Sikk408 @ DevaintArt <<<

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    Linzor's Avatar White shores, and beyond

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    That's some really good artwork man, damn!

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    Very bad. Needs a lot of work. The lighting is way off. Very dark in some areas. It's a no from me.


    ....i love it


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    I rate it...

    Surfen/Fish


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    Updated

    This is what it looked like at the end of the first time I sat down and started it, the image in the original post is how it looks now (the second time I worked on it)


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    I'd personally add more "lamps" or whatever they are towards that lamps that are on the Island itself, now it's just 3 floating dots leading nowhere.

    Overall pretty amazing job, Jess.

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    Originally Posted by no closure View Post
    I'd personally add more "lamps" or whatever they are towards that lamps that are on the Island itself, now it's just 3 floating dots leading nowhere.

    Overall pretty amazing job, Jess.
    Wrong, the lamps are fine and it's the only thing that makes the digital art a warm look at first sight of the piece, usually 2-3 is fine for that resolution, bigger one could use more lamps with different sizes, the one he used as a number and size are fine.

    @Jess, keep in mind that you have a dark atmosphere around the mountain and the only upcoming lightning source is from the lamp on the right side (around 96-97°), therefore, you shouldn't be adding colors that would make the mountain lighten/brighten as there is no source behind it, first and original image you posted looks better than the updated one unless you have something in mind for the 2nd one but don't forget the light source, that's important when doing digital art and photomanipulations.

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