[TAG + AVATAR] Interrogation

[Pulse]

Mkay guys.

I've made yet another new tag, I've called this one "Interrogation".

Please CnC it, DO NOT Rate it. Tell me what you think of these things:

• Depth
• Lighting
• Flow
• Realism
• Over-all "Feel" of the Tag

I made a Tag and an Avatar.

P.S: The Korean lettering at the bottom mean "Interrogation"

Here it is! :


Tag:


Avatar:


Thanks guys!

[Gothix]

* Depth -- Too Deep.

* Lighting -- Too ****.

* Flow -- Great.

* Realism -- Too Sharp.

* Over-all "Feel" of the Tag -- Decent. a Little too Black. The Orange Glows Dont Match With Anything But Themselves.


Edit:: Just Noticed.
You Cut The Avatar Right Out of The Sig Correct?
And The Left and Right Sides are a Little too Blank.
Make It Filled.
If You Know What i Mean.

[Fresh]

* Depth - Meh, you could on this part a bit more.
* Lighting - In your case, you could place in a tiny bit more to the right and if you totally changed it all the positions of the splatter brushes, perhaps on the shoulder.
* Flow - Meh
* Realism - Meh
* Over-all "Feel" of the Tag - Like Gothix, it's decent.

[Bakpao]

Imo the light source is waay too easy, could be much better, knowing your level of skill.

The black splatter brush would look much better being a C4D (I think)

I like the rest ;k

[Historia]

The first i saw this piece is the lightning and the splatter brushes are kinda the vocal :S

try to make the lightning real and blur the splatter brush a bit. Further more you could resize it a bit because there is to much open space at the size where no effects are and only brushed with black (or filtereffect)

[Pulse]

* Depth -- Too Deep.

* Lighting -- Too ****.

* Flow -- Great.

* Realism -- Too Sharp.

* Over-all "Feel" of the Tag -- Decent. a Little too Black. The Orange Glows Dont Match With Anything But Themselves.


Edit:: Just Noticed.
You Cut The Avatar Right Out of The Sig Correct?
And The Left and Right Sides are a Little too Blank.
Make It Filled.
If You Know What i Mean.

Thanks for CnC ^^
@ Cut-out part: Yarp.

* Depth - Meh, you could on this part a bit more.
* Lighting - In your case, you could place in a tiny bit more to the right and if you totally changed it all the positions of the splatter brushes, perhaps on the shoulder.
* Flow - Meh
* Realism - Meh
* Over-all "Feel" of the Tag - Like Gothix, it's decent.

Gracias for CnC

Imo the light source is waay too easy, could be much better, knowing your level of skill.

The black splatter brush would look much better being a C4D (I think)

I like the rest ;k

I agree about the C4D, but I was too lazy to, the the point of the splatter was to Clipping mask her face on it and lower opacity and break it up a little, but it didn't turn out how I wanted D:

The first i saw this piece is the lightning and the splatter brushes are kinda the vocal :S

try to make the lightning real and blur the splatter brush a bit. Further more you could resize it a bit because there is to much open space at the size where no effects are and only brushed with black (or filtereffect)

Thanks !


Thanks everyone for the CnC