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    Dead end - I had the idea in mind, I knew what I wanted it to look like, but I feel like something's wrong. Any idea on how to improve it?



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    Resort's Avatar Aloha

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    What did you do to it? You added the bubbles and the jellyfish and gradient mapped it? anything else? It's hard to tell when we don't know what you've done.

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    is it meant to be that dark cause i barely can see sry im blind

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    i like it

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    hm..after debating for a while...I don't know maybe if you could get some backlight on the trees to make them look more 3D and to represent the moon's luminescence (the trunks)

    i know its dark, and supposed to be..but something about the trunks just bugs me a little (if I were to critique)

    overall, very well done piece imo

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    The big two jellies in the front are poorly blurry/done, think if you try and make those again it might make your overall piece look a lot better.
    I actually like the whole idea of the piece!

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    Originally Posted by Resort View Post
    What did you do to it? You added the bubbles and the jellyfish and gradient mapped it? anything else? It's hard to tell when we don't know what you've done.
    Although you do not necessarily need to know what I've done -LP unintended reference- in order to tell me what looks weird in it, here's the original photo:
    https://unsplash.com/search/forest?photo=XaR_INqTssg

    Originally Posted by Surfen View Post
    is it meant to be that dark cause i barely can see sry im blind
    I strongly believe you are not blind. Yes it is dark.

    Originally Posted by Konfuse View Post
    i like it
    Thank you c:

    Originally Posted by EASTVAN View Post
    hm..after debating for a while...I don't know maybe if you could get some backlight on the trees to make them look more 3D and to represent the moon's luminescence (the trunks)

    i know its dark, and supposed to be..but something about the trunks just bugs me a little (if I were to critique)

    overall, very well done piece imo
    Thanks for your criticism. Yeah that's a good idea to try and create shadows on the floor in relevance to the moon.

    Originally Posted by StephanM View Post
    The big two jellies in the front are poorly blurry/done, think if you try and make those again it might make your overall piece look a lot better.
    I actually like the whole idea of the piece!
    Thank you, these jellys were actually blurred on purpose, as to give a depth effect (to make them seem closer to the viewer's eyes).
    I'll post an edit without blurring them and see how it looks.
    Last edited by Lemonish; 04-24-2017 at 12:03 PM.

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    Originally Posted by Lemonish View Post
    Dead end - I had the idea in mind, I knew what I wanted it to look like, but I feel like something's wrong. Any idea on how to improve it?


    http://i1267.photobucket.com/albums/...t%20piece5.jpg
    Cool idea, but I didn't even notice the guy in the background.
    I think it would be a better piece if you removed him

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