I get what you're trying to accomplish but it doesn't work out.Originally Posted by Pharaoh
The effects that you have placed on her just hurts my eyes. You could try to dim the effects and blend the bubble c4ds.
Besides that my eyes automaticly focus on the text pshyicadelic and I think the mean focus should be Yoko..
If you make a few more versions with the tips you've gotten from this thread, you could improve this piece by a lot!
