First of all, thats not just double post, its also going off-topic.
About your video...
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In the begin, to many fail aims... thats not good to watch at, try to make more frags and then show last hits or just moments of it that you only hit them.
At the last frag you keep rs'ing all the time... Sorry but thats just boring to look at
and also nothing special, it could be a KS since sombody else is attacking to.
Same effects over and over again
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The first frag, after you killed the enemy you zoomed in on the body, thats good.
Work on it, make it longer and its alright
P.S. don't get mad, there just opinions and tips, okay?