Time's Fgunz video (short)

[Marvin]

Lol i know it's not that good.

Well it started when Time asked me to put the files together no effect at all and post it on youtube.

But yeah i kinda rushed on everything. But as long as my buddy time likes it im happy.

I want the slowmo i like it.
idc what you guys say QQ in da corner.
I like it when u dont like press the [x] right! And ye i asked JsTaNub for a short video just for fun. hes a good mate he helps me and he did what i want.

[slugheady]

soz for double post but Weiipeiik wanna 1v1?

First of all, thats not just double post, its also going off-topic.


About your video...

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In the begin, to many fail aims... thats not good to watch at, try to make more frags and then show last hits or just moments of it that you only hit them.

At the last frag you keep rs'ing all the time... Sorry but thats just boring to look at and also nothing special, it could be a KS since sombody else is attacking to.

Same effects over and over again

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The first frag, after you killed the enemy you zoomed in on the body, thats good.


Work on it, make it longer and its alright


P.S. don't get mad, there just opinions and tips, okay?

[Marvin]

:sherlock:

First of all, thats not just double post, its also going off-topic.


About your video...

-
In the begin, to many fail aims... thats not good to watch at, try to make more frags and then show last hits or just moments of it that you only hit them.

At the last frag you keep rs'ing all the time... Sorry but thats just boring to look at and also nothing special, it could be a KS since sombody else is attacking to.

Same effects over and over again

+
The first frag, after you killed the enemy you zoomed in on the body, thats good.


Work on it, make it longer and its alright


P.S. don't get mad, there just opinions and tips, okay?

mkay. thanks...

[Nigel]

First of all, thats not just double post, its also going off-topic.


About your video...

-
In the begin, to many fail aims... thats not good to watch at, try to make more frags and then show last hits or just moments of it that you only hit them.

At the last frag you keep rs'ing all the time... Sorry but thats just boring to look at and also nothing special, it could be a KS since sombody else is attacking to.

Same effects over and over again

+
The first frag, after you killed the enemy you zoomed in on the body, thats good.


Work on it, make it longer and its alright


P.S. don't get mad, there just opinions and tips, okay?

Tips are for me then. I made the video as you can reed in my previous post.

[slugheady]

Tips are for me then. I made the video as you can reed in my previous post.

Sorry didn't noticed, if you need any help then i'm willing to give it

[Historia]

lol, nice song etc but its a bit boring, the kills could be better(i mean more action) and some more effects.

[Bakpao]

-Song is overused
-2 kills which aren't appropriate for in a frag
-No effects whatsoever except for slowmo which is overdone
-Waaaaay too short
-Umm yeah intro could be better


Yeah.. Could be better

[Weeeeiipk]

Bam , so there u go. Ur not kind and no i dont want to 1v1 someone who thinks there beast. Ur not kkthx. And ur vid i already statd this. TOO many slomows and the slowmos are wayy to long. Its like ur whole video is in slowmo. So Get@me

[Xemgin]

Nice Vid Time my bro :banana: xD

If im back we make a new pro vid :crazy:


@all who said its bed: Make a better vid than we can talk (a better short fun Vid^^)

[Nickachu]

It's nice for a beginning, and i'll just go ahead and copy paste what everyone else said.

- Too many slowmo's used, personally i like it when the kill is slowmo'd or a really pro moment.
- The editing in the beginning is, not really my thing it's too simple.
Simplicity can be nice to use tho, just not with an intro hehe.
- I know this is a short video, but the next time you make a video just make it longer and try to expirement with it more.

I don't really have alot of Video experience, but this is just my personal taste i hope my advice will help you.