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    Faky's Avatar Stop Being Fake

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    Hello, this is my 2nd attempt please do rate 1-10
    https://i.imgur.com/nHgnOGW.jpg
    Render link: https://imgur.com/a/Wl2nAfB
    Font Name: Forever7

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    Bipolarity's Avatar ɪɴᴄᴏɢɴɪᴛᴏ

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    Better than last one though, keep working

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    Hi Faky it looks good my man keep going and you'll just improve each time.

    "What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us."



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    your link to the render is not correct.

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    Good attempt. I don't usually comment but here's some info, the character doesn't blend in with the background well, the theme is fine but the colours used on the character do not blend with the background. Also the style of the background, which is like an oil painting I'm guessing, doesn't go well with animated characters. Try designing a different background, keep the render, and set a fixed colour scheme for the background that matches the render.



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    That looks nice, good job.
    "Nobody cares, work harder"
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    my opinion is the colour scheme looks really nice
    i was buggin on an insane trip, my wifey showed me the light==
    soul elevation thru the twin flame tip, yeah, it just us, we are feeling so right
    in pursuit of justice from spaceships, we will always be whole in our Sameness
    sewn like seeds of a star, on our wayback to Oasis
    doing good deeds from a far, destroying the matrix
    WE are not caught up in the matrix
    WE have no fear, escaping that trick be so basic
    this is our world, let us stage it
    learn to love yourselves, then re arrange it
    blessed, we have the chance to give others sight
    we know trueth and what's wrong from what right
    doin due diligence, burning the midnight oil all night
    my wings are growing, aye embrace hers and take flight

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    Originally Posted by Bunny View Post
    your link to the render is not correct.
    I tried to cover text from background image, ok i need to blind it with bg.

    Originally Posted by #1Chef View Post
    Good attempt. I don't usually comment but here's some info, the character doesn't blend in with the background well, the theme is fine but the colours used on the character do not blend with the background. Also the style of the background, which is like an oil painting I'm guessing, doesn't go well with animated characters. Try designing a different background, keep the render, and set a fixed colour scheme for the background that matches the render.
    Noted mistakes and i will work on it.

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    Good job, i like it.
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    Now you now how to make it

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