Not my music genre but is it really cool to see you giving it a shot, the video editing is cool but has some cheap moments/look with not everything flowing over properly (after the box with play pops, the next frame still shows the letter P in the middle for example or when the goat figure guy holds your head it looks semi cheap), for for a first video it is really nice and cool.
The more you release the better it will become!

What I do like is that I can actually hear what you are sining/rapping/what ever you want to call it, often with this kind of music a lot of words are mumbled etc. so I would suggest to keep this as your style, clear words.

Free sub and like cause we have to support a fellow OG Freestyler!


P.S. I like the hairband rock!