Nice to see you again Eddie,
This is indeed a nice gift to gift us
On topic : (First listen review)
I liked the video and display, was nice.
I honestly wouldn't listen to this twice, its not that catchy and I felt like it was slow at times,
Your voice has some cracks here and there, I'm not sure if that's how you wanted it to sound (?)
You can definitely keep producing more songs and your tone with the words you spit out will be much better with practice
Maybe the way you sound is fine, just need to get used to the rhythms and speed of spitting
Some parts of the song were really good though, I don't think I liked the intro though, I felt it was long af
I ain't no professional critique, though one thing is for sure, the more I play the song the better it gets ( i honestly didn't like at all first time, but the more I listen
the better it gets)
Honestly the more I play it the better it gets, so that's awesome
Anyway, keep grinding Eddie! It will pay off and you'll improve
