My Debut Music Video

[Mia]

Looks and sounds good! good luck (I do feel like your rap should be a bit faster tho)

[Eddie]

Nice to see you again Eddie,
This is indeed a nice gift to gift us

On topic : (First listen review)
I liked the video and display, was nice.
I honestly wouldn't listen to this twice, its not that catchy and I felt like it was slow at times,
Your voice has some cracks here and there, I'm not sure if that's how you wanted it to sound (?)
You can definitely keep producing more songs and your tone with the words you spit out will be much better with practice
Maybe the way you sound is fine, just need to get used to the rhythms and speed of spitting
Some parts of the song were really good though, I don't think I liked the intro though, I felt it was long af
I ain't no professional critique, though one thing is for sure, the more I play the song the better it gets ( i honestly didn't like at all first time, but the more I listen
the better it gets)
Honestly the more I play it the better it gets, so that's awesome
Anyway, keep grinding Eddie! It will pay off and you'll improve

Looks and sounds good! good luck (I do feel like your rap should be a bit faster tho)

Thank you for your feedback my bibi love tings <3 So this song was actually recorded and initially released in February 2019. The video process was recorded and edited recently. I've improved a lot since then and this song I was also trying something different with the flow. It makes sense in the beatboxing world (if I were to "drop a beat" as an example it'd make more sense), so I wanted to try to fuse what I did with beatboxing with the rapping. I look back months later now and I agree I could've executed the flow a bit differently. The flow was basically supposed to create a "fading out" kind of effect where I make your body movements slow down as you're moving along to the beat/song. Just needed to be executed differently since some spots ended up awkward. Live and learn ^_^

If this type of music is what you prefer, I have music on all streaming platforms under the name AbsirdsTheWord with all different flows and vibes to the songs.

Again, appreciate all the feedback from everyone !

[Hulk]

Thank you for your feedback my bibi love tings <3 So this song was actually recorded and initially released in February 2019. The video process was recorded and edited recently. I've improved a lot since then and this song I was also trying something different with the flow. It makes sense in the beatboxing world (if I were to "drop a beat" as an example it'd make more sense), so I wanted to try to fuse what I did with beatboxing with the rapping. I look back months later now and I agree I could've executed the flow a bit differently. The flow was basically supposed to create a "fading out" kind of effect where I make your body movements slow down as you're moving along to the beat/song. Just needed to be executed differently since some spots ended up awkward. Live and learn ^_^

If this type of music is what you prefer, I have music on all streaming platforms under the name AbsirdsTheWord with all different flows and vibes to the songs.

Again, appreciate all the feedback from everyone !

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aTY0...AbsirdsTheWord
I like the flow on this song its fire, it felt missing something small though that would make it perfect