Text isn't fitting, the blood effect that slides on the hand just doesn't fit, looks like it's been smudged and quality ruined, no depth around the render, it looks like it's been just put on top of a background with a text on top and nothing more..
When applying glowing eyes effect, don't use huge px brush on it to put the color and then set the layer to Lighten or Color Dodge, instead color the eye's color only inside and set that to Lighten or whatever you wish.
You need to play more with making the render blend with the background and the effects such as C4D, wireframes or whatever resources you call it, your previous work was better.
