New map [WIP]

[Syzygy]

Hi! I'm a bit new to map making, although I've had some experience I'd like to get a lot better. I'm working on a map now, I'd like suggestions/tips and constructive criticism. How do you like it so far? I would like some suggestions on what little things to add, and some texture suggestions and such. I've named it 'Abandoned Building' as of now, I'm not sure if it's fitting. Here's my work so far.

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It's one of my first maps in a while, and I'm trying a different approach on maps. I usually rush them and they come out bad. Help me make this one nice? Thanks for reading

[Art]

Nice Apex Yo tryout for dev
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[Vickachu]

Looks intresting. i would love to see it finish. if you need more help or anything look here : http://gzmap.sourceforge.net/forums/index.php

[Syzygy]

Helpful, thanked. ^-^

[silentsoul]

i find it cool looking. but... u know... i think i have seen some thing like this before some where on the net... am i correct?
looking forward to play on it ;D

SilentSoul

[StephanM]

Post your progress (like texture it and stuff) !

[banner]

not to bump an old thread but ur map looks kewl

[iCreative]

Veryy nice!

[Alone01]

This shiet is the BOMB! Keep it up

[slugheady]

I don't see a gunz map in this, sorry.

The spaces are quite open, you face eachother at spawn point (if they are where they look the most obvious) and it has nothing unique on it.

If you look like maps that are played the most... then its Mansion, Town, Garden and Asylum, yeah and hall but ok thats duel.

Mansion has this mirrored construction that makes it able to play AnD which is fun, Town is a map with a good theme and its nice to play in since its not to big, but not to small either. Garden is alright, I personally don't really like it but it is mirrored and the size of the halls are alright (though the stairs sux in my eyes), asylum is just very unique, its not really balanced and vents can be used wrong, it mostly depends on how fair people play in it but its alright and it has a nice setting.

Now, from all that I have named there, I don't see any of that in your map, maybe you can show me wrong with changing something, adding something and such but don't make it to crowded with objects and such.

I'd like to see some texture versions because this blue is killing me