Need help for my Entry. [All vote Please]

[JShaya]

Don't ever deliver work that isn't finished yet, don't ever show something if it isn't finished yet saying it is, you can show something but then for tips, not like this so I wont pick.

light source is like one of the basics, light, shadows and DOF are for me the most important yet sometimes easiest things to have in sigs or anything else, it makes it much better most of the time so just improve that.

Thank's, Im going to try and improve that, Since your the Pro at Lighting

[JShaya]

I Think i have fixed the light i dunno it really fail's for my first time using Lighting Effects Pro-ly.

Here it is Slugheady Tell me if it's a Tiny bit better?

ORIGONAL:

http://i55.tinypic.com/n6fb5y.png

IMPROVED LIGHTING ?

http://i52.tinypic.com/122btzk.png

[Joel]

version 2 is too bright

I Think i have fixed the light i dunno it really fail's for my first time using Lighting Effects Pro-ly.

Here it is Slugheady Tell me if it's a Tiny bit better?

ORIGONAL:
http://i55.tinypic.com/n6fb5y.png
http://i55.tinypic.com/n6fb5y.png

IMPROVED LIGHTING ?
http://i52.tinypic.com/122btzk.png
http://i52.tinypic.com/122btzk.png

the second is best xD

[JShaya]

version 2 is too bright



the second is best xD

Thnx
I Might aswell use that one for my entry i dunno, Waiting on more Opinion's but nobody like's to Cnc with me cuz i aint liked...
Didn't even get any Bday post's QQ