Now it's my best work.

[Icy]

[JShaya]

The render doesnt blend in, It just seem's like it's just been Dumped on, Seem's low Quality aswell Bad text palcement for me...
How ever im sure that background could be useful for another render with MORE ACTION in it.
You have no flow, it wouldn't look good with a flow anyway's because there's not really any action.

[Luneth]

Dude thats nice ;D, you got alot better.
7/10

1 point. You need to remove the white thing around the render.

[JShaya]

Dude thats nice ;D, you got alot better.
7/10

1 point. You need to remove the white thing around the render.

Most likely Outer Glow.
Also get a new render, This one has NO ACTION in it.

[Genetic]

Render doesn't fit with Bg.
But u got better

[Icy]

Woot.

i got better LOL.

[Pulse]

Actually, I disagree with all of these posts. Your current black and white phoenix tag is much better.

Seriously.

[Ekital]

Lol why venom ;D

Anyway the render you used is low quality. What I don't like about it is it looks like it was just a render placed on a recolored fractal. You still need a lot of work bro.

[Icy]

Lol why venom ;D

Anyway the render you used is low quality. What I don't like about it is it looks like it was just a render placed on a recolored fractal. You still need a lot of work bro.

I got better didn't I?

Plus I was too lazy to find abetter actioned one XD.

[Ekital]

I got better didn't I?

Plus I was too lazy to find abetter actioned one XD.

Not really man. Sorry to say, I don't think you even read any tutorials do you? We always tell you to do it but I doubt you do.