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    Can you give me your opinon/rate this siggy for me i used alot of the tips some of you guys gave me and i really appreciated it, so here is what i got

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    Ekital's Avatar Ultima

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    1.)Scan lines are over-done.
    2.)There's no focal point.
    3.)No action
    4.)Don't use paragraphs for subtext actually never write subtexts -.-


    Don't want to write 100 points but you have a lot of work to do and I would focus on the points I told you about.

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    Originally Posted by Ekital View Post
    1.)Scan lines are over-done.
    2.)There's no focal point.
    3.)No action
    4.)Don't use paragraphs for subtext actually never write subtexts -.-


    Don't want to write 100 points but you have a lot of work to do and I would focus on the points I told you about.
    samurai champloo was an epic anime

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    Alym's Avatar HocusPocusHipHop

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    Hmmmm i see something stretched... and kinda agree with ekital

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    You used to many scanlines. And I think you should remove 1 render, and bring the other one to the centre of the picture.


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    5.5/10 ;oo

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