Practice with flow and lighting?

[slugheady]

http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/g...dor16/flow.png

Yea speaks for itself. Any tips?

Lightning effects the body, background anything...
You made a nice light source but now watch the lightning at your character, watch these points
-The hair, has 0% lightning
-The front arm is bright, yet the light comes from the other side?
-The overal lightning on the character is equal
-Some shadows aren't correct with the light source (cap etc.)
-Make different strength is shadows
-That anime sig is real damn annoying trying to focus on your sig D:

and the background, its okay though the light has very less effect on it, could be cooler.

overall it looks nice, yet it could look way better

[Ekital]

Lightning effects the body, background anything...
You made a nice light source but now watch the lightning at your character, watch these points
-The hair, has 0% lightning
-The front arm is bright, yet the light comes from the other side?
-The overal lightning on the character is equal
-Some shadows aren't correct with the light source (cap etc.)
-Make different strength is shadows
-That anime sig is real damn annoying trying to focus on your sig D:

and the background, its okay though the light has very less effect on it, could be cooler.

overall it looks nice, yet it could look way better

The hair never had any lighting and I was too lazy to add any
As for the light source yeah i messed it up a bit.

[Ekital]

Final Version:



I'm done with this I kinda messed up in the beginning with the lighting and didn't wanna re-do but here's the final outcome.

[Joeyy]

Final Version:

http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/g.../flowbyeki.png

I'm done with this I kinda messed up in the beginning with the lighting and didn't wanna re-do but here's the final outcome.

Right upper corner is looking really odd, I suggest smooth that out more. Also the pink light on the right of her body is very distracting, this is because it is too bright and there is some weird dark smudge above it.