manga character concepts

[Nickachu]

Hey guys, I've been working on my manga lately. ( Mostly writing, since I haven't touched photoshop in a DAMN while )
and I got the whole concept of the story figured out, I basically used soul eater as reference to the whole story, I love that anime.

so yeah my story will be about 2 futuristic assassins, a boy and a girl ( step brother/sister ) that wish to become the best assassination team out there.
however there's a big obstacle... they SUCK.

anywho, here's the character design of the male character in this story. I haven't thought of a name yet, who knows what I'll get ?
concept:
http://i39.tinypic.com/346b4ue.jpg

sketch:
http://i41.tinypic.com/2ljouvr.jpg

phase 1: adding detail:
http://i41.tinypic.com/1zf553l.jpg

Phase 2: even more detail
http://i40.tinypic.com/344r2iv.jpg

FINISHED: ( added a lot of detail + surroundings to blend it all in. + adjustments. )

I WILL BE UPDATING THIS FREQUENTLY. SO DON'T HATE IF I DOUBLE POST. THANK YOU

[Rain]

omg he looks sick! can i help? pleasee !

[Promience]

Nice story and awesome look!

[Nickachu]

omg he looks sick! can i help? pleasee !

what would you like to help with?
I basically need someone to develop the story, and think of characters with SPECIFIC details.

[Hiresh]

I cant understand how people make those things with Photoshop..

[Luso]

Amazing, I think you should have it so his mask comes off, I think Manga looks better when you can see facial expressions.

I love it though!

[Nickachu]

I cant understand how people make those things with Photoshop..

why? what's wrong with photoshop?
I have been using it since like.. forever. so I have no idea how corel painter works. as far as I know, the UI of painter sucks donkeykongs balls.

[A Tissue]

Seems legit This character + epic story = legit manga do it like GANTZ

[Hiresh]

why? what's wrong with photoshop?
I have been using it since like.. forever. so I have no idea how corel painter works. as far as I know, the UI of painter sucks donkeykongs balls.

Im using photoshop for like 2 years but i have never used it to draw things
Looks very hard o.o

[Rain]

what would you like to help with?
I basically need someone to develop the story, and think of characters with SPECIFIC details.

I can help you with story and Character specific details,I was also working on a manga my self i still have the concepts on paper but i'm to laizy to scan them.


I already have something sick in mind for you'r manga.You may like it.